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Nominator:SkywalkerEccleston (talk ·contribs)10:55, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer:Kimikel (talk·contribs)18:34, 28 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Hello, I will be reviewing this article soon. Please expect comments within a few days.Kimikel (talk)18:34, 28 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@SkywalkerEccleston: I've left some small initial comments below. Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns regarding them. Once you finish, I will give the article another look.Kimikel (talk)04:47, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
HiKimikel, I have updated the article.SkywalkerEccleston (talk)06:21, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@SkywalkerEccleston: Thank you for the quick response. One tiny thing: I believe that Note A still needs verification.Kimikel (talk)16:31, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
User:Kimikel UpdatedSkywalkerEccleston (talk)05:38, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@SkywalkerEccleston Excellent. I'm ready to pass this article now. Great work, thank you and congratulations.Kimikel (talk)16:27, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Well-written

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Lead

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  • of prominent Gaelic Irish lord > of the prominent Gaelic Irish lord [false title]
  • She was born > Mabel was born [must start paragraph with name instead of pronoun]

Courtship and marriage

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  • 1590, her eldest > 1590, Mabel's eldest
  • and he forbid her > and forbid her
  • Prominent Gaelic lord Hugh > The prominent Gaelic lord Hugh [false title]
  • Historian Philip Bagenal > The historian Philip Bagenal
  • Turvey, County Dublin > only Turvey should be wikilinked according toMOS:GEOLINK

Married life

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  • Historian Jerrold Casway > The historian Jerrold Casway

Death

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  • Mabel fell ill, and she ultimately > Mabel fell ill and ultimately
  • Historians Casway > The historians Casway
  • Henry was killed by Tyrone's forces > Tyrone's forces killed Henry

Legacy

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  • genuine if ill-fated love > genuine, if ill-fated, love

Verifiability

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  • Note A is unverified
  • Morgan, Hiram (2014b) > I don't know if the b is needed here
  • I believe the Paul Walsh source should just list him as the editor

Spot check

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  1. 46: Dead link. Tweet author does seem to be a SME as detailed byWP:SPS
  2. 53: Verified
  3. 29: Verified
  4. 51: Could not access URL
  5. 15: Verified

Broadness, stability, and neutrality

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  • This assessment of her role in the Nine Years' War is considered to be simplistic. > By whom and for what reason?
  • an influential biography > "a biography" is more neutral

Illustrated

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  • All properly tagged PD.
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