if im being honest i love this vn so much.

zander have the same shitty personality as me and i hate every second of it.

im trying to be a better person and i actually accomplished it, after reading this vn i actually realized theres someone out there whos ahve to struggle like this and i hope we all can get thru this together turn into the best version of us.

all i wanted to say is thank you so much for making this vn, i mean it.

this VN really reminds me the WWE back in 2008

I have my DM’s open but I’m not getting the verification message for the discord and instead of getting the message I get immediately booted out of the server with nothing appearing in my DM’s

It's the best VN ever! The way the story dives deep into emotional issues is just brilliant. It doesn’t shy away from the tough stuff. Instead, it embraces it. You end up going on this rollercoaster of feelings, and when a character hits rock bottom, you can’t help but feel that gut punch. It reflects many things in this world of struggle. Thank you so much for creating such a profound and meaningful story. Definitely waiting to follow the next story!

Is this game going to be continued?
Or is there going to be a new one but the same characters for Undefeated?
Also great game!
10/10

ive decided its my prerogative to leave comments under art that moves and wowzer bowzer this shit is tuff,
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MMA fighting and ace-gay dragon rep is genuinely so awesome.i was so endeared to all the characters at the end i just wanted them to be happy and fulfilled. they each remind/ed me of myself at different times when i was/am at my worse; the tension of each fight tightened around me like a verbal noose yet i kept dancing on the edge of my chair...until the slack was completely cut by the coolest lads coming together with the power of friendship to defeat the forces of hatred. hahah that sounds tacky but it was very genuine and sincere, the ending felt earned and i got wholesome poly gay[and gayace] furry :].
GET THOSE FIGHTERS UNIONIZED

Absolutely wonderful experience reading this VN, definitely got me on the verge of tears several times, highly recommended.

PS. I'd kill for Redline

When I got into this I wasn't expecting messages about self-love and found family. There were many tears. I wish I could forget everything and read it again. Thank you to everyone who worked on this.

This was great. I absolutely Love a story that makes me change my perspective on characters so strongly and it wasn't just the obvious character i have in mind when i say that.

Not the best

When I first heard about this project I didnt know what to expect other than fighting being a big part of it. After meaning to read it for so long and now having done so, wow.PLEASE READ IT IF YOU HAVENT. I will share a few thoughts as a personal send off and compliments to the chef :> Where do I begin?

Early on they are very flawed and a lot of them come across like dicks, but that's why their development shines so much better. The hook for the whole story is set up so early that the resolution of it at the end of the story is a bitter sweet win. It was a perfect way to start off the narrative. And while the cast is small with only a handful of important characters, they all get so much love and attention and work incredibly well of each other, that I feel like any more would have been distracting. 

The writing of the day to day life, the  training, fighting and many of the heart to hearts were written so well that I got immersed in the world.
Fight days were the highlights, with the action being clear with mostly words and few visuals. While the mundane days leading up to it had drama and surprises around every corner. I never knew what to expect, sometimes it was silly with lighthearted moments thanks to Redline, Bucky and Drayden. Other times members of FANG as well as each interaction with Bruce left an uneasy air as well as a little bit of mystery? It was great.

This may not be true for everyone, but it felt nice being able to relate to a lot of the personal issues the cast was facing. (Not to spoil anything, but having a character be asexual made me jump out of my chair. Thank you for the representation I often feel missing in VNs ;v;)

When it comes to the late half of the story had me at the edge of my seat. The intensity of the conflicts increased with each passing month in the story, I was scared of what it all builds up to. I grew so attached to the characters that I was rooting for them like they close friends I desperately needed to succeed in order to know peace.
Although the story's end is satisfying, I adore its world and main cast so much, that it makes me wish there was more. These 3 grown goobers and their spiritual fathers stole my heart haha!

All this to say I loved it. It's been on my mind ever since, it resonated strongly with me and I cannot emphasize how well it's doing what it set out to do. Excited for future projects!!! 

(I dont write reviews like ever so I hope my ramblings make sense haha) 

RAAAAAAAAAA IT’S GOOD !!!!

Shaking in my boots I just finished it 

I am unbelievably happy to have read this story 

My heart rate picked up a lot over course of this, really put my ass on the emotional roller coaster, had me rootin and hollering(internally) 

I will be thinking of their vacation at the beach house. As the break they truly deserve! I could feel myself going light headed when that relationship was truly defined, great stuff great stuff I’ve always wanted to see that in media 💛💛💛

Hello！I'm coming to ask if I can translate your work into Chinese.It will not be used for commercial purposes.Just to share your fantastic work with more furry-loving people.I'm looking forward to getting a reply from you whether you permit it or not.PLEASE！  ヽ(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ

I though that i am playing undertale because of the final battle ost

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I'm gonna need about 5 sequels to this vn filled with just the day to day lives of Zancer, Red and Bruce and them being the power throuple of all time

I love this Visual Novel. 

Great Humor 

Great Characters

Great Plot

I would really like a sequel too this.

Great visual novel with loveable character and insteresting story

I Laugh so hard when reading Bruce trying to seduce cole lol

I LOVE THIS VN SO MUCH IT DESERVES A MILLION STARS IT WAS BEAUTIFUL I CANT EVEN COMPREHEND IT ANYMORE AAAAAAAAAAAAAH

wrote a longish review on my website, in case anyone is interested:https://purkka.fi/fvn_recs.html#undefeated

In first impression I thought this was an ordinary vn when I found it but after reading though it i am shocked how good it is if I were to rate it,it will be a 10/10 one the best ones I ever read and with a heartwarming ending and I am excited for their next project if there is one. =)

That was an amazing read, wow! Didn't really know what to expect when I found this but I'm so glad I decided to give it a go. So so so good!

Thanks to the author and to everyone else that made this VN possible, it was truly a delight to read.

What weird lazy detailing on the end...

i love this so so so so so so so so so much

im gonna miss this so bad 💖💖

Congratulations on completion. What a ride that was.

Are there routes? Like for Drayden, Bucky and Redline. I ask because of the options for hanging out and all that.

I just finished reading and I gotta say I'm sad to see that its over. The ending was so sweet. This VN was pretty deep and emotional at times and I really liked the characters a lot. The 2 choices at the end of the phone call with dad especially, held SOO much weight to it. I just sat there staring at the screen for 5 min unsure what to click. Imma miss my Brucey, Drayden and everyone needs someone like Redline or Buckey in their life. Sad to see them go.

This VN is as solid as Bruces Jaw! 5 stars!

It’s been such a nice ride ^^I’m so happy to see the end of this beautiful story and also sad that we won’t see our boys again in another round.Haters that used to plague this project be damned! They will not see how fulfilling experience it become. It’s us who will remember and spread the word and love to the world!Thank you Leo <3

It was a short, but awesome novel for me. While reading, I felt both sorrow and happiness, both anger and enthusiasm. I felt what the characters felt at that moment and I was always eager to find out what would come next. I'm truly grateful for  ur team and ur job. U did everything perfectly. I absolutely loved the ending and happy that everything ended like that. ^w^

PS. The commissioner is an a**h**e.

I don't know how to express how I feel about this Vn, but just wow, and to think that I followed the development from its first version and looked forward to the next update month after month, now that it's concluded I can say that it was worth the wait, and the ending, like almost every Fvn that ends, leaves me with a feeling of emptiness, you become attached to the characters and you would like to live more adventures with them but it left me with great satisfaction. Congratulations and thank you for this great work, I enjoyed it.

Unngggg....The ending was so sweet I was tearing up the whole time ;-; 

I'm so happy I got to experience this VN, and thanks so much for making it. I enjoyed every second of this!

Wow... That was just.... Wow. Gut-wrenching and bittersweet at the same time. This VN was a wild ride, and I'm glad I stayed till the end. Like, damn, I'm not even into wrestling and all that stuff, but this thing just changed something in my head forever. Great work!

That was the very best ending one could make with that story. Hat off to you, for you made the kind of character I couldn't help but root for.

What a beautiful send-off in the end. Undefeated has so much heart in it, it’s really lovely. I’ve gotten teary-eyed multiple times over the course of this story. Redline is just the sweetest fighter ever. But really, all the character writing was really well done. Thanks for sharing this VN with us! >w<

I already gave this vn 5 stars a while ago so ill just leave a comment. Loved this vn, was hooked since the first round and the ending (whilst extremely violent xD) didn't disappoint 10/10 mwah

Fantastic game

Leo can we ever get a sequel to this one, please

I loved it🙌

I love a happy ending. The stuck together through thick and thin and made it out alright. Though it has come to an end this vn will hold a special place in my heart. It may too much to ask but pls make a sequel of how they're spending their vacation at the beach house 🙏