Slight nitpick:
SCP-1295-3: Look who's talking! Your's wouldn't even exist if people got their acts together!
Wouldn't it be "yours"?
Loved the dialogue. Upvote.
I would say you ought to bluebox the Log, but otherwise, +1, a good read.
Edit: Also, "Gut flora" in the -3 description sounds weird and unclinical. Is that the technical language? I would imagine "Abdominal" or "Digestive" would be more appropriate, but I don't know much about that subject.
Oh, okay. Sorry, I'm an Illustration major, haven't taken much in the way of science classes in a few years.
Also, another thing:
"minor is it may be" in the -4 description, shouldn't "is" be "as"?
I'm curious how the Foundation became aware of this.
I mean, obviously something (police, construction, etc.) blocked the old men to the restaurant to cause the effects to manifest, and such a random event would obviously gain Foundation attention, but how did they find the link to some old men?
I originally planned a discovery log involving the owner wanting to sell the place, the old men not not agreeing to move, the police getting involved and a small town being destroyed as a result. It was making the article a bit bloated though, so I left it out.
Probably because someone noticed that these four guys go to the same restaurant every single day, and their effects happened in a pretty obvious circle around a specific location.
I'm confused. :( I get that Dwight is Eisenhower, and that 3 is hyperchondria… I think. Sorry, I just don't get it. Still, the conversation managed to get a chuckle out of me.
Nope, wrong Dwight. The four elderly gentlemen are of the kind who enjoy the occasional horse ride, if that helps.
Oooooooh… Wow, I'm thick.
Upvoted, because I like the irony of these guys beingnecessary.
I assumed it wasn't so much inverted effects as they just plain didn't turn on; maybe the guys were too grumpy to do their job. No war=no self preservation or self defense! No famine=eat anything! No disease=Goodbye helpful microbes! And the only way to have no dead is to have everyone become thanatophobes.
The four were stuck on Earth when War(ren) mistook an atomic bomb explosion for the end of days.
Now I need to listen to that.Thanks,ObamaCellar Door Skara Brae
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I'm necroposting so much lately (but I mean, how can I not when everyone left years ago) but this is my favorite comment in the comment section.