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Date:21 Nov 2017 09:33
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djkaktusdjkaktus21 Nov 2017 09:35

Shoutout to /r/SCP who more or less convinced me to look this one over again. Here's to you lot.

Many thanks to Shaggy and Hippo who basically sat and broke this one down with me for three straight hours tonight. I don't know if it's any better, but it definitely feels better. Either way, I hope you all enjoy it.

UnfoldTake two bydjkaktusdjkaktus,21 Nov 2017 09:35
MortosMortos21 Nov 2017 11:23

I really like this. Kind of starts off with a Buffy vibe and then just goes creepy to the max. The logs are excellent, especially the exploration.

Not sure I entirely get what's going on here, but I have some theories.

Unfold byMortosMortos,21 Nov 2017 11:23
FlawedFlawed21 Nov 2017 11:52

I don't know if this is intentional, but why do they refer to it as SCP-3935 in the UIU document?

Unfold byFlawedFlawed,21 Nov 2017 11:52
(account deleted)21 Nov 2017 21:48

As far as I can tell, it's asummary of a UIU document. That bugged me too when I first read it.

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Jacob ConwellJacob Conwell21 Nov 2017 13:10

Glad to see you gave this another shot.

+1. Spooky School Horror is fun.

Unfold byJacob ConwellJacob Conwell,21 Nov 2017 13:10
DrMagnusDrMagnus21 Nov 2017 13:21

For the record, I dislike the formatting at the top, but that's just a personal touch, not a "real" critique.

The actual content is solid, as always, and easily gets my +1.

Unfold byDrMagnusDrMagnus,21 Nov 2017 13:21
stormfallenstormfallen21 Nov 2017 15:03

Excellently done, much better put together than the last version.

Only real complaint is that the trope of "exploration team loses communication and it sporadically comes back while they say something creepy" is something you've done a lot of before in 1730 and 2935, for example. Also, you name the UIU amnestic used in the log but footnote 6 doesn't know what it is.

Unfold bystormfallenstormfallen,21 Nov 2017 15:03
And, by the soft water, there was a voice.
(account deleted)21 Nov 2017 15:57

This is incredible as always. You really ratchet up the unsettling. The bit with the mucus coming out of the taps sold it for me. Upvote.

UnfoldAnd, by the soft water, there was a voice. by(account deleted),21 Nov 2017 15:57
(account deleted)21 Nov 2017 18:01

This definitely seems like the set-up to something bigger. Are there any plans on expanding on this SCP?

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Minor Error
BrosterMctoasterBrosterMctoaster21 Nov 2017 20:54

If I understand it, the first Addendum is a UIU field report, written before the Foundations involvement. However, there are a few instances of SCP-3935 written down in the report.

Seeing as this is UIU documentation before SCP involvement, this shouldn't be found within the document, correct?

Either way, great stuff my dude.

Re: Minor Error
djkaktusdjkaktus21 Nov 2017 21:14

Good catch, I'll fix that.

UnfoldRe: Minor Error bydjkaktusdjkaktus,21 Nov 2017 21:14
GenshedGenshed21 Nov 2017 22:30

Call me Mr Jones. There's something going on here and I don't know what it is. But it's believably unsettling.

The detail of the amnestic causing permanent memory issues led well into the last interview. She seemed authentically disoriented, and the periodic nudges to get her back on track were effectively used.

I almost don't want to find out what happened.

Unfold byGenshedGenshed,21 Nov 2017 22:30
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