What a fun read! Loved the rivalry, power struggle and sexual tension between the soldiers. I was also delighted and fascinated by the  world building in this short story. Every time there was a new snippet of lore i wanted to know more.

I've been thinking about this all day after reading it... Such a fun read, characters efficiently given just enough development for their dynamics to be interesting, and very sexy. Seconding the comment about the compelling worldbuilding too.

fascinated and allured by the high concept dystopian empire where they invented hypergender and created the gayest, fuckiest hunks who live on cum-based protein shakes. this was a slice of delightfully indulgent fuck cake that left me wanting more. the way their bodies are described, especially bear 3's, is so autoandrophilic. i love it.

the final vignette at the end made me giggle, which softened the blow of it sadly being over. 

i would genuinely love to see more set in this universe - the horny overtones make the dystopian imperial stuff feel like elaborate lingerie type of set dressing. something to engage the mind while i'm following these fucked up hunks.

all in all - great work. will be reading this again for years to come.