I think if you'd keep the face of a monster to be revealed in the final jumpscare that would worked better, because I wasn't scared anymore because I knew how he looked like. Also I believe that the sound que was a little too early, so I haven't even seen the moster but I knew he made a jumpscare.
I also think adding more random sounds, like scratching, breathing, moving stuff around would make it reaally terrifing!
I acually like working this night shift hah
Just few notes, missed all jumpscares cuz I wasn't looking in the right direction. I think if the camera would be locked to see the jumpscares, thatt.. would be just perfect.
And overall great game!!
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Not bad game, could use some polish, some scares didn't quite hit the mark cuz I wasn't looking into the right direction anyways. There also wasn't anything that you could do to protect yourself like holding a knife, or hiding that would save you, so that made you feel like no matter what you do you will get jumpscared. Not bad but I will tweek some things :)
Kiedy zobaczyłam, że notatnik jest po polsku poczułam się jakbym była w stanie rozszyfrować starodawne łacińskie zapiski haha. Świetna gra, wszystko mi się bardzo podobało. Jeśli potrzebowalibyście kogoś oblatanego w polskim i angielskim (ponad C2) dajcie znać bo strasznie chciałabym pracować przy takim projekcie!
First of all, I realy like the style of this game but I think there is a room for improvement. So it's very hard to be involved in a story without any context what so ever. Little storytelling would be very great, like who am I, what am I doing here and WHY am I here. Simple story would work the best, like 'I'm a park ranger and I got a call from my boss' or 'My sister went camping here and she hasn't contacted me in a week'. Anything as long it's logical would do. Also building the tention is soo important, you could make the cuts when the tape changes to be when something happends, when the protagonist founds the body or he is atacked by the canibal. Anything just to give people a good scare. So all that said I hope you will listen to my and other people feedbacks and succed at your game.
Good luck!
Okay so first of all, the game has very good atmosphere and it's very hard to make that. Second of all there are one things I would change if you strive to make it work. In my opinion there is too much talking and no option to skip it. It's better to show a story tnak to tell it. I would much rather have alex talk to his sister more then just his monologue. Also the sentences are kinda strangely written,there is no personality into those dialogs, no relationships between family members, jsut do this do that, no emotions. Third of all there is not much gameplay, I think there is 20% gameplay 80% cutscenes and without option to skip it its getting borring realy fast. Oh and also make opening doors more smooth that you don't smach your face with them every time. The game has huge potential and I hope you'll succed!
