Awesome story!

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it!

Thank you! I really wanted to work with the Stalkers, trying to make them "good" while at the same time keeping that creepy, alien feel that the concept art gives off.

I LOVE this story, the whole concept of the robots actually taking care of the place is phenomenal.

Good story! As feedback, I'd say, take care of tenses; the story was mostly in present tense, but some parts switched to past tense and back to present. Aside from that, separating different voices in dialogues into new lines really helps the reader understand who's speaking, without needing to clarify too much. One character speaks, the other replies in the line below, and so on.

Awesome story!

Really good story! I didn't fully get the "consequences" theme, unfortunately, but the story is super well written and it's really entertaining!

Really good story. Though now I'm wondering if the hogodile they ate might've been an orc that didn't take off the costume fast enough lol

Amazing story. I'd love to read more of Charlotte's adventures, both before and after that ending.

Very cool story! I loved seeing the different points of view, it added a ton of depth to the story.

Really good story! I loved the point of view from the Vampire Lord, plus the whole narration was just excellent.

Thanks!

Thank you! Guess we'll see, if I continue the story sometime!

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it

Thanks!