Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Flow & Clarity | #2 | 4.154 | 4.154 |
Overall | #4 | 3.923 | 3.923 |
Concepts & Originality | #9 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
Adherence to Theme | #17 | 3.615 | 3.615 |
Ranked from26 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Interesting. I set mine in the robot legion uprising and it's fun to see a very different take on it.
I loved the little excerpts from in-universe books added to the story, it gives context to how the surviving members of the High Elf Fleets felt about his attempt to genocide what was left of his race, as well as allowing us, the reader, to realize that people in the universe saw him as an influential figure who ultimately went insane. It evokes ideas similar to Aleksandr Kerensky of Battletech fame, although if he had taken a darker road.
Great worldbuilding addition to the core GF lore! Very well executed!
Very cool story! I loved seeing the different points of view, it added a ton of depth to the story.
Well written, the story flows nicely with your worldbuilding without it just being exposition which is not easy.
Arrogance, ambition, and alien warfare abounds! Ever thus to traitors.