I rate it 7.5/10 but I gave it 4 stars

Pretty good for a first attempt. A nice short experience, took me about 5 hours, the story is wholesome, the premise is kinda like dragon quest 11 .  Dialogue is a bit rough around the edges, a few words don't fit the fantasy theme and it can be cheesy at times, but otherwise it's good 

Gameplay works well, it's a bit easy but the locations and dungeons are well made and the game is well balanced, they are well mapped except for the overworld which is small and kinda pointless honestly

Few suggestions:

1. Replace the default faces with custom ones using the character generator
2. Change later blacksmith interaction by making it one text box than a choices menu, would make it less tedious
3. Since this is MV, you can make Zektion dual wield, by going into the database than actors than traits than equip, look for the slot type option and you can make him dual wield,
4. Spelling is good, only one mistake I saw,  it's "apparently" not "appearently".
5. Remove the waiting times between missions,  like with the inn, the fey  repairing the gemstone and so on and so forth you can just make it fade  out to black and then fade in,  just for convenience sake.