read this whole ass thing in two days, i genuinely could not stop it was beautiful it was amazing intriguing painful captivating thought-provoking representing i could hardly pull myself away. this whole thing being made and finished by you with help from a few friends, art and story? completely paralysing. were i permitted to, i would sit down and translate this whole thing to arabic. i dont know how much of a new demographic it would bring in but i think it would be funny and respectful. and also i can read it over word by word and think about it more. jist of it is this is gonna stick with me. i started writing up some shit of my own after reading.

random backstory: like two or three years ago, me along with a bunch of people hopped in a voice chat with intent to read this story all through with a unique person voicing each character. we stopped a big chunk of the way through and now that i've finished it i'm mildly glad we didnt go through with it. and also i retained almost nothing from it apart from deez nuts jokes so it was shocking to read the story more clearly.

p.s. ugh im adding this to the list of things i want to pay for. also i did have quite a bit of trouble with the parts where the characters didnt clarify exactly what aspect of the erection they were talking about. (quite a few scenes where they're talking vaguely about things it was really hard to know what they were talking about. what do you want spencer to tell ian, andrew? that he has a penis or he has an erection or he is sexually attracted to him or he is not sexually attracted to him or that he is okay with it or...