Stygian Sun: Total Eclipse IF
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Fen, My God, no amount of words can describe how much I want to just implode. the story-line is so thrilling , captivating, anchoring even. every character literally has my heart (Farah more than anything) and I cant stand being with out more of this wonderful creation. though I wanted to imagine the protagonist sparring or engaged in at least a battle. This was fantastic the work you put into making this was worth it.
so how do you feel about making me shed an uncontrollable amount of tears with the loss and grief of our siblings???,,.,,,fjskdjsk. on a separate note. having lost my older sister to an accident, the grief written in this story is so beautifully portrayed and dear fucking god it was so uncanny how accurate the process of grieving was to mine. very well done, and beautifully written!! i can't wait to see more from you 💖💖
i believe it should still work on mobile, but right now it hasnt been designed with that in mind so some things potentially might not work (I was able to play a bit on my phone but I haven’t fully tested the whole game). I’ll look into optimizing it for mobile eventually but it’s going to take some deeper delving into coding so it’s lower on my list of priorities for now. If you run into any game-breaking issues on mobile let me know and I’ll try to see if I can figure out how to fix them so it’s still playable. :)
hey i have a question the game. i played this before but then i had to stop bc the chapter ended so after a little bit i found out the game had updated (aka today, bc i when back to a old save to finish where i left off) but i go and try to find out where my charter info is so i go on stats bc i didn't find a charter info thingy. But it said something like 'Currently Unviable' but idk if this is wrong and that i'm looking at a wrong place to look or that i need to restart the game, can someone please help ty ^^
WAIT HOLD ON... are you on to smth?? I was sus Luca or L were the wolf because they both have yellow eyes (and the way Luca acts about it is strange) but... they were both in a fire, have the same burn marks, MC doesn'tknow Luca died died.... L could be projecting into their dreams, a part of their childhood subconscious or something... But the fact that L is also familiar to mc??? And they're both mages... umm😳 THEIR TATTERED CLOTHES ARE SIMILAR TOO..... Omg I was already going to romance L, but aaaaaa😳😳😳
Really loved it. I'm actually wiping a few tears away at the moment, myself. My MC is such a contradiction. Gentle and charming with those he cares about, but also rather feisty and confrontational. Poor Keiran...they are about to get a fierce but loving fiance. Like...adopting a cat. Only its a human prince.
So when do we get to storm Dad's office and threaten for answers?
The Lunar King thinks I'm a little Lamb for the slaughter, but this Lamb might be his worst nightmare. =P
I'm really glad to hear that--thank you so much for playing!! ❤️❤️ Contradictory mcs are always real fun to play! It's fun to hear about everyone's mcs and their fave personality stats. :D
Kieran will be a tough one to crack--but I'm sure your mc will be able to get through that ice! A fiercely loving companion/fiance is just what they need. :)
MC will be on their quest for answers in the next update!
The Lunar King better watch out (but so should you 😰😰)
Thanks so much for playing and for sharing your thoughts! I really appreciate it and enjoy hearing them!! ❤️❤️
This was unexpected - but a Lovely surprise! You continue to Wow me with your writing; you have such a talent for description. The way you portrayed the blood stone and pact and how that process felt was Breathtaking. Just downright- - Gorgeous.
Love how my MC is shaping out and the dialogue/pacing remains delicious. I’m naturally interested in (Princess for me)Kieran since you gave us a cheeky lil teaser on who they are - - and I Love complicated attractions —but I really like Samira too. When she wasn’t just - Charmed by a flirty MC, I was impressed/intrigued! I like that your character isn’t an exception~ Also wondered if Farah was on the spectrum (which would be amazing); I could see it.
Can’t wait to see more of the characters (feels like more family’s coming up) and hopefully more ROs! So interested in their depth and how they fall into this wicked plot you weave. ;)
Thank you so much!! I enjoy trying to do lyrical descriptions (thesaurus is my best friend) so I'm glad to hear you liked them! ❤️
Complicated attractions are fun and that's what I had in mind for Kieran's romance/friendship arc. :D And Samira isn't often too impressed with a very flirtatious mc lol--she deals with Aurynn on a daily basis and doesn't need two of him.
I hadn't written Farah specifically with that in mind, but I don't mind if you'd like to view her as on the spectrum! I could see it fitting her. I do intend to write some of my other characters with autism in mind, though. :)
More family will be coming up in the next update for sure--like mc's mother for one. And the rest of the ROs will be introduced in chapter 2! :D
I hope you continue to enjoy it as it's updated! Thanks so much for playing and for sharing your thoughts--it really makes my day!! ❤️❤️
We love a cheeky thesaurus use~ ;) I have my thesaurus out Constantly, so that hit me on a spiritual level lol
Agreed! In fact, they’re my favorite type of romance barring ‘they're Perfect for each other, yet still can’t get their ish together’ kind. I already have a feeling I’m gonna like Kieran because Aurynn called them ‘soft’ and ‘puppy’ . Love me an ice queen with a sweet, creamy center~ But it also depends on if K doesn’t care about the effects of this war (and particularly MC with all their incredible loss); if they’re just an ass, I won’t be attracted at all. It’s actually why I’m looking forward to Kieran/Samira poly — that’ll be REALLY Friggin Interesting. (And give some lovely balance.) Because - why is SAMIRA attracted to K?? 🤔👀 Idid think that was Exactly why Samira wasn’t about that flirt life haha
I love that you write with something like autism in mind! I have autistic and ADHD friends and they really opened me to seeing those (potential) traits in people. Personally feel like we’re all on a spectrum in some way; can’t wait to see the characters you intended it for (if we haven’t already)!
Yasssss, MOM. Bring on the complex familial relationships. It’s a shame so many siblings died as it seems the Mothers(TM) were very much conspiring against each other/ensuring their child was number one. Couldn’t have been easy establishing sibling bonds.
I’m so glad to see that! I’m sure I will with what you’ve given us thus far~ Thank you for commenting back as well! ❤️🤘🏾
I wouldn't worry about any of the ROs being irredeemable assholes lol--Kieran may come off as cold and standoffish, but they aren't a complete dick. ❤️
I gotta think about all the poly dynamics and how those will flesh out throughout the story, but I think Kieran/Samira will be an interesting one to write 🤔
The mothers definitely made things hard between the siblings, always trying to pit each other against each other, but the sibs managed to stay really close regardless. 😌❤️ MC will be able to choose whether their own relationship with their mother is close or strained.
I loved this! The options for MC's personality were so good - I do kinda wish we could see more reactions from other characters, but I was overall very satisfied with being able to play as a grief-stricken royal desperately trying to maintain an air of dignity.
Also there's no way I can leave poor Farah 😭! She just wants her big siblings to spend time with her 😢
Thank you, I’m glad you liked it! :)
Farah is young and lashed out but you’ll have a chance to talk to her in the next update and hopefully reconcile her first impression 🙏 :)
I have also edited her scene slightly for the upcoming update to try to better insinuate she is acting hysterical for another underlying reason rather than just to be bratty