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Make an editorial pass over the 9.0 release notes.

This is mostly about grammar, style, and presentation, though I did finda few small factual errors.

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`1`		`-<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml,v 1.306 2010/08/22 02:37:32 momjian Exp $ -->`
	`1`	`+<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml,v 1.307 2010/08/23 02:43:25 tgl Exp $ -->`
`2`	`2`
`3`	`3`	`<chapter Id="runtime-config">`
`4`	`4`	`<title>Server Configuration</title>`
`@@ -3507,7 +3507,7 @@ local0.* /var/log/postgresql`
`3507`	`3507`	`</row>`
`3508`	`3508`	`<row>`
`3509`	`3509`	`<entry><literal>%e</literal></entry>`
`3510`		`- <entry>SQL state</entry>`
	`3510`	`+ <entry>SQLSTATE error code</entry>`
`3511`	`3511`	`<entry>no</entry>`
`3512`	`3512`	`</row>`
`3513`	`3513`	`<row>`
`@@ -3578,7 +3578,7 @@ FROM pg_stat_activity;`
`3578`	`3578`	`<para>`
`3579`	`3579`	`<application>Syslog</> produces its own`
`3580`	`3580`	`time stamp and process ID information, so you probably do not want to`
`3581`		`-use those escapes if you are logging to <application>syslog</>.`
	`3581`	`+include those escapes if you are logging to <application>syslog</>.`
`3582`	`3582`	`</para>`
`3583`	`3583`	`</tip>`
`3584`	`3584`	`</listitem>`
`@@ -3705,7 +3705,7 @@ FROM pg_stat_activity;`
`3705`	`3705`	`virtual transaction ID,`
`3706`	`3706`	`regular transaction ID,`
`3707`	`3707`	`error severity,`
`3708`		`-SQL state code,`
	`3708`	`+SQLSTATE code,`
`3709`	`3709`	`error message,`
`3710`	`3710`	`error message detail,`
`3711`	`3711`	`hint,`

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`1`		`-<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ddl.sgml,v 1.95 2010/08/20 13:59:45 tgl Exp $ -->`
	`1`	`+<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ddl.sgml,v 1.96 2010/08/23 02:43:25 tgl Exp $ -->`
`2`	`2`
`3`	`3`	`<chapter id="ddl">`
`4`	`4`	`<title>Data Definition</title>`
`@@ -846,7 +846,7 @@ CREATE TABLE order_items (`
`846`	`846`	`</para>`
`847`	`847`	`</sect2>`
`848`	`848`
`849`		`- <sect2>`
	`849`	`+ <sect2 id="ddl-constraints-exclusion">`
`850`	`850`	`<title>Exclusion constraints</title>`
`851`	`851`
`852`	`852`	`<indexterm>`

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