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‎doc/src/sgml/history.sgml‎

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<sect1 id="history">
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<productname>Postgres</productname> has undergone several major releases since
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then. The first <quote>demoware</quote> system became operational
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in 1987 and was shown at the 1988 <acronym>ACM-SIGMOD</acronym>
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Conference.We releasedVersion 1, described in
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<xref linkend="STON90a">,
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Conference. Version 1, described in
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<xref linkend="STON90a">, was released
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to a few external users in June 1989. In response to a
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critique of the first rule system
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released in June 1990 with the new rule system.
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Version 3 appeared in 1991 and added support for multiple
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storage managers, an improved query executor, and a
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rewritten rewrite rule system. For the most part,
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rewritten rewrite rule system. For the most part, subsequent
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releases until <productname>Postgres95</productname> (see below)
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focused on portability and reliability.
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obvious that maintenance of the prototype code and
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support was taking up large amounts of time that should
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have been devoted to database research. In an effort
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to reduce this support burden, the project officially
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to reduce this support burden, the Berkeley
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<productname>Postgres</productname> project officially
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ended with Version 4.2.
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processing applications.
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The relational model successfully replaced previous
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models in part because of its <quote>Spartan simplicity</quote>.
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implementation of certain applications very difficult.
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power by incorporating the following additional
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category of databases referred to as
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<firstterm>object-relational</firstterm>. Note that this is distinct
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which in general are not as well suited to supporting the
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which in general are not as well suited to supporting
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traditional relational database languages.
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object-oriented features, it is firmly in the relational database

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indicates that you must choose one.
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indicates that you must choose one alternative.
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