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Commitdfcf99b

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Neil Conway
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Fix a bunch of bad grammar in the docs: "<link>, which see for more
information" is un-good English.
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‎doc/src/sgml/ddl.sgml‎

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<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ddl.sgml,v 1.74 2007/05/03 15:05:56 neilc Exp $ -->
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<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ddl.sgml,v 1.75 2007/05/15 19:43:50 neilc Exp $ -->
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<chapter id="ddl">
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<title>Data Definition</title>
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All these actions are performed using the
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<xref linkend="sql-altertable" endterm="sql-altertable-title">
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command, which see for details beyond those given here.
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command, whose reference page contains details beyond those given
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here.
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‎doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_role.sgml‎

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$PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_role.sgml,v 1.7 2006/09/16 00:30:16 momjian Exp $
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$PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_role.sgml,v 1.8 2007/05/15 19:43:51 neilc Exp $
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PostgreSQL documentation
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<para>
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The first variant of this command listed in the synopsis can change
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many of the role attributes that can be specified in
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<xref linkend="sql-createrole" endterm="sql-createrole-title">,
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which see for details.(All the possible attributes are covered,
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<xref linkend="sql-createrole" endterm="sql-createrole-title">.
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(All the possible attributes are covered,
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except that there are no options for adding or removing memberships; use
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<xref linkend="SQL-GRANT" endterm="SQL-GRANT-title"> and
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<xref linkend="SQL-REVOKE" endterm="SQL-REVOKE-title"> for that.)
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<listitem>
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These clauses alter attributes originally set by
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<xref linkend="SQL-CREATEROLE" endterm="SQL-CREATEROLE-title">,
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which see for more information.
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<xref linkend="SQL-CREATEROLE"
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endterm="SQL-CREATEROLE-title">. For more information, see the
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<command>CREATE ROLE</command> reference page.
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‎doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_user.sgml‎

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$PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ref/alter_user.sgml,v 1.43 2007/05/15 19:43:51 neilc Exp $
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<para>
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<command>ALTER USER</command> is now an alias for
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<xref linkend="sql-alterrole" endterm="sql-alterrole-title">,
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which see for more information.
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<xref linkend="sql-alterrole" endterm="sql-alterrole-title">.
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‎doc/src/sgml/ref/begin.sgml‎

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$PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/ref/begin.sgml,v 1.35 2007/01/31 23:26:02 momjian Exp $
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<command>BEGIN</command> is a <productname>PostgreSQL</productname>
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language extension. It is equivalent to the SQL-standard command
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<xref linkend="sql-start-transaction"
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endterm="sql-start-transaction-title">,which see for additional
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compatibility information.
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endterm="sql-start-transaction-title">,whose reference page
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contains additionalcompatibility information.
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‎doc/src/sgml/ref/create_group.sgml‎

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<command>CREATE GROUP</command> is now an alias for
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<xref linkend="sql-createrole" endterm="sql-createrole-title">,
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which see for more information.
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<xref linkend="sql-createrole" endterm="sql-createrole-title">.
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‎doc/src/sgml/ref/create_user.sgml‎

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<xref linkend="sql-createrole" endterm="sql-createrole-title">,
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<xref linkend="sql-createrole" endterm="sql-createrole-title">.
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‎doc/src/sgml/ref/createlang.sgml‎

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command.
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‎doc/src/sgml/ref/drop_group.sgml‎

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<xref linkend="sql-droprole" endterm="sql-droprole-title">,
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<xref linkend="sql-droprole" endterm="sql-droprole-title">.
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‎doc/src/sgml/ref/drop_user.sgml‎

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