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- This only works if <literal>max_wal_senders= 0</literal>
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- and <literal>wal_level= minimal</literal>.
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+ This only works if <literal>max_wal_senders = 0</literal>
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+ and <literal>wal_level = minimal</literal>.
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@@ -1837,7 +1837,7 @@ Author: Amit Kapila <akapila@postgresql.org>
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</para>
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- In some cases a partitionchild table could appear more than once.
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+ In some cases a partition could appear more than once.
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@@ -2186,8 +2186,8 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
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When applying <link
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linkend="functions-datetime-zoneconvert"><literal>AT
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TIME ZONE</literal></link> to a <type>time with time zone</type>
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- value, use the transaction start timenot wall clock time to
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- determine whether DST applies (Aleksander Alekseev, Tom Lane)
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+ value, use the transaction start timerather than wall clock time
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+ to determine whether DST applies (Aleksander Alekseev, Tom Lane)
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<para>
@@ -2480,14 +2480,15 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
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- Adjust <application>psql</application> so that Readline's
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+ Adjust <application>psql</application> so
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+ that <application>Readline</application>'s
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meta-<literal>#</literal> command will insert a double-hyphen
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comment marker (Tom Lane)
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- Previously a pound marker was inserted,but that's pretty
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- unhelpful in SQL .
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+ Previously a pound marker was inserted,unless the user had taken
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+ the trouble to configure a non-default comment marker .
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@@ -2712,7 +2713,7 @@ Author: Robert Haas <rhaas@postgresql.org>
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- New options are <literal>server</literal> to write the
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+ The new options are <literal>server</literal> to write the
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Previously such files were left in the current directory,
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- requiring manual cleanup. It's still necessary to remove them
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+ requiring manual cleanup. Now they are automatically removed on
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