@@ -487,7 +487,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
487487 <para>
488488 The existence of this file in the data directory is used to help
489489 <application>pg_ctl</application> determine if the server is
490- currently running or not .
490+ currently running.
491491 </para>
492492 </listitem>
493493 </varlistentry>
@@ -536,8 +536,8 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
536536 </para>
537537
538538 <para>
539- An example of starting the server,blocking until the serverhas
540- come up is :
539+ An example of starting the server,and waiting until the serveris
540+ accepting connection :
541541<screen>
542542<prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>pg_ctl -w start</userinput>
543543</screen>
@@ -555,11 +555,12 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
555555 <refsect2 id="R2-APP-PGCTL-4">
556556 <title>Stopping the Server</title>
557557 <para>
558+ To stop the server, use:
558559<screen>
559560<prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>pg_ctl stop</userinput>
560561</screen>
561- stops the server. Using the <option>-m</option>switch allowsone
562- to control <emphasis>how</emphasis> thebackend shuts down.
562+ The <option>-m</option>option allowscontrol over
563+ <emphasis>how</emphasis> theserver shuts down.
563564 </para>
564565 </refsect2>
565566
@@ -568,7 +569,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
568569
569570 <para>
570571 Restarting the server is almost equivalent to stopping the
571- server and starting it again
572+ server and starting it again,
572573 except that <command>pg_ctl</command> saves and reuses the command line options that
573574 were passed to the previously running instance. To restart
574575 the server in the simplest form, use:
@@ -579,14 +580,14 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
579580
580581 <para>
581582 To restart the server,
582- waiting for it to shut down andcome up again :
583+ waiting for it to shut down andrestart :
583584<screen>
584585<prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>pg_ctl -w restart</userinput>
585586</screen>
586587 </para>
587588
588589 <para>
589- To restart using port 5433 anddisabling <function>fsync</>after restarting :
590+ To restart using port 5433 anddisabe <function>fsync</>upon restart :
590591<screen>
591592<prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>pg_ctl -o "-F -p 5433" restart</userinput>
592593</screen>
@@ -597,7 +598,7 @@ PostgreSQL documentation
597598 <title>Showing the Server Status</title>
598599
599600 <para>
600- Here isa sample status output from
601+ Here is sample status output from
601602 <application>pg_ctl</application>:
602603<screen>
603604<prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>pg_ctl status</userinput>