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I've listed this article for peer review to know how improve this article.
Thanks,Sdrtirs (talk)21:40, 1 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Ruhrfisch comments: Interesting article and here are my comments to help improve it:
- The three tags at the top of the article need to be addressed first - this needs inline references (seeWP:CITE andWP:V), and the external links need to meet the criteria inWP:EL. No hope of getting to GA, let alone FA without these.
- Is this a list or an article? It might make sense to split out some of the lists as separate articles and make this more detailed and prose on the league. SeeWP:Summary Style
- The lead needs to be expanded - seeWP:LEAD
- External links such asThe 2006-07 season saw an average attendance by club [3]: need to be converted to inline refs too.{{cite web}} and other cite templates may be useful here.
- A model article is often helpful for ideas - there are a large number of FA and GA articles atWikipedia:WikiProject Football that may prove helpful.
Hope this helps,Ruhrfisch><>°°04:21, 7 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
