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Wikipedia'speer review process is a feature where an editor can receive feedback from others on how to improve an article they are working on, or receive advice about a specific issue queried by the editor. The process helps users find ways for improvement that they themselves didn't pick up on. Compared to the real-worldpeer review process, where experts themselves take part in reviewing the work of another, the majority of the volunteers here, like most editors in Wikipedia, lack expertise in the subject at hand. This is a good thing—it can maketechnically worded articles more accessible to the average reader. Those looking for expert input should consider contacting editors on thevolunteers list, or contacting a relevantWikiProject.

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i've listed this article for peer review to get it to featured article status. with hope! prose checks will be necessary (especially for english variety slippages). this is also an open call for more sources. i'm confident in the sources already presented as it reflects pretty much every major work written about the film specifically or kurosawa in general (in addition to some intro-to-film textbooks which provide a greater foundation for some of the legacy claims); but i'm sure there's another few things that can be found. all the best!--Plifal (talk)05:30, 14 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

LastJabberwocky

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Always happy to see your work in my feed! Checked source quality and format, will later try to come up with prose suggestions. —LastJabberwocky (Rrarr)13:57, 14 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]



I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to bring this to Featured article status in the near future if possible.

Thanks,Cukie Gherkin (talk)00:38, 12 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Olliefant

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  • The images need alt text
    Added alt text
  • In the ref titles "GO" should be "Go" perMOS:ALLCAPS
    Fixed
  • Ref 6 should link "Bleeding Cool"
    Fixed
  • Ref 20 should be marked as being in French
    Added
  • Ref 29 is appearing as dead despite the original being live
    I'm not sure how to fix that
  • Ref 27 is missing the website
    What do you mean? the |work is listed as Behind the Voice Actors, and it links to the website
  • "In a 2020 official poll" in what medium?
    Clarified
  • "Ash would later send Talonflame to live with Professor Oak" and "It was featured in his final team in a championship tournament, the Kalos Lumiose Conference" these two are in the wrong order
    Fixed
  • Link "non-playable character" on first mention
    Done
That's what I foundOlliefant (she/her)02:35, 13 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
@Olliefant: Responded to your comments -Cukie Gherkin (talk)22:01, 13 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
I meant ref 37, it was a typoOlliefant (she/her)22:28, 13 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
Oh, gotcha -Cukie Gherkin (talk)22:54, 13 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Could you put citation at the photo's caption at concept and design section? 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔)19:18, 14 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]


Previous peer review


I've listed this article for peer review because I have been wanting to move it to featured status. Any suggestions are truly appreciated.

Thanks,Shoot for the Stars (talk)20:01, 8 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

FAC PR sidebar

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@Shoot for the Stars: I have added this article toTemplate:FAC peer review sidebar. Please consider reviewing other articles listed there. I suggest reviewing articles atWP:FAC as that will help with understanding theFA criteria and build goodwill amongst FAC reviewers. Lastly, I suggest reaching out to aFA mentor who can leave suggestions in this PR on how to improve the article.Z1720 (talk)03:28, 11 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Peer review: Leave It All to Me

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Hi@Shoot for the Stars: I've had a read through the article and it's in pretty solid shape overall. Here are some thoughts that might help improve it further.

Structure and prose

The article flows well and is easy to follow. The sections are logically ordered. A couple of minor prose points:

  • In the lead, "from the Nickelodeon showiCarly's soundtrack album of the same name (2008)" is a bit clunky. Maybe simplify to something like "from the soundtrack album for the Nickelodeon showiCarly."
  • The "Promotion and impact" section reads a bit like a timeline of events — "In April 2017... In June 2021... Throughout 2022... In July 2023..." Varying the transitions would help the prose flow more naturally perMOS:PROSE.

Content

  • The Critical reception section is well sourced and gives a good range of views. Nice work pulling together so many different reviewers.
  • The Background and release section covers the ground well, though the detail about Cosgrove fighting to keep the theme for the revival feels slightly repetitive — she "wanted to keep the original theme song" and then "had worked hard to keep the original theme song" in back-to-back sentences. This could be tightened perWP:CONCISE.

Sourcing

  • Sources look solid throughout, with a good mix of reliable outlets perWP:RS. Archive URLs are in place which is great forWP:LINKROT.

Other bits

  • The chart section is clean and properly formatted.
  • The music and lyrics section does a good job describing the song without straying intoWP:OR.

Overall this is a well-constructed article. The sourcing is thorough and the coverage is balanced. Nice work — just a bit of prose tightening and it'll be in great shape. Hope this helps!Metalicat (talk)00:11, 12 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Metalicat thanks a lot for the review! I have added your suggestions in the article.Shoot for the Stars (talk)21:00, 14 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Camilasdandelions

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The article is shaped in very good shape, but:

  • In lead,A music video was released for the song in 2008, seems kinda awkward; tryA music video for the song was released in 2008
  • "Creditswere adapted ~" is correct phrase and more natural.
  • Do not include the song's name in tablecaptions, perMOS:HEADERS.

That's all I see. Good luck!Camilasdandelions (✉️) 22:06, 14 February 2026 (KST)

Camilasdandelions Thanks a lot for the review! I have added your suggestions.Shoot for the Stars (talk)21:01, 14 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]



I've listed this article for peer review because dubious claims, weak or unverifiable sourcing, and possible promotional tone. Article may contain inflated information and lacks strong independent citations.

Thanks,Endlessdan (talk)22:43, 5 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Arconning

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Here are some few comments...Arconning (talk)15:22, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

  • There are two backticks at the top of the article which should definitely be removed.
  • An image included in the infobox will greatly help picture out the main figure of the article. Upon seeing the body of the article, I can see some images that can be used for it.
  • "and musician from the Bronx, New York.", remove "the Bronx, New York"
  • There are tags that need to be resolved such as [better source needed] and [by whom?]
  • Speaking on the [by whom?] tag, it needs to be written out on who stated the exact quote.
  • The acting career section could be renamed as "Filmography" as it includes a reality TV show which isn't necessarily acting.
  • Mention his sexuality as it is mentioned in the categories but I don't see any explicit statements in the article stating such.



I've listed this article for peer review because I am interested in the featured list status, but I am not sure what to do, so I am here to check if there're points can be improved.

Thanks,Saimmx (talk)09:27, 5 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

"Cheonmak School" was not an official name of the school. The Korean wording just means the school started off with tent classrooms. Also, theSeoul Shinmun source is actually talking about the legal entity which owns Hanlim Multi Art School and not really the school itself. A quick google search in Korean says the school itself opened in 2009. --00101984hjw (talk)07:59, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you. I will change it later.Saimmx (talk)16:01, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
Done. You are right on it. I think it is the school firstly established as a tent in 1960, then teaching wousewives, and now the place began training idols because he found that students cannot find a place dancing, right?Saimmx (talk)16:57, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
Yes. Also, it appears that the official English name of the school has been "Hanlim Arts School" since 2020 ([1],[2]). You might want to change this as well. ("Hanlim Multi Arts School" may appear more frequently in English search results but this is usually because a lot of Korean newspapers translate their articles using AI.) -00101984hjw (talk)13:43, 11 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, thanks. I have noticed that you changed the original article. I will move it later.Saimmx (talk)14:44, 11 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
Done.Category:Hanlim Multi Art School alumni might need more work if we need to move, but anyways.Saimmx (talk)16:45, 11 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]


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Previous peer review


I've listed this article for peer review because I want to nominate this to FAC. Since the previous failed FAC mentioned the prose quality, I received help fromWP:GOCE. I would appreciate to receive other feedbacks to improve this article.

Thank you,Shenaall (tc)03:56, 2 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Camilasdandelions

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Although K-pop is not my main era, it's so good to see that my native country idols are planned to be FA, thanks to nice contributors like you. I'm so proud of it! I just quickly chekced some probs, and I found that:

  • I think Name section should be expanded more, or be integrated to other sections.
  • In entire of History section,Kami no Tō: Tower of God is linked twice.
  • Time is linked twice but in different section. I don't think the wikilink in Artistry section necessary. (But not in Impact section; I believe it's useful in there.)
  • Go Live andNoeasy linked twice in Artistry section
  • I didn't mention other duplicated links which is linked twice indifferent section, exceptTime. But you can downloadthis script to detect DL and fix them if you think they're unnecessary :).Camilasdandelions (✉️)14:24, 2 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for the feedbacks @CamilasdandelionsShenaall (tc)03:01, 12 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

LastJabberwocky

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Hi,@Shenaall: I will look for through the 'artistry' section and below. —LastJabberwocky (Rrarr)21:18, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

  • Stray Kids' music is inspired by hip-hop, dubstep, heavy metal, electroclash, and dance-pop. It has been described as "dark and experimental". Consider adding more sources and separatinf genres that are most commonly assigned to Stray Kids
  • After the release of the album Go Live, the public and some entertainment media outlets began calling Stray Kids the pioneers of "mala taste music" (Korean: 마라맛 음악; RR: Maramat eumak), a name they adopted from the hot, spicy mala seasoning, and it became a rising music trend among K-pop boy groups. Consider adding a brief describtion of mala taste music. Is it associated with any music genres?
  • During the showcase for Rock-Star During a showcase of Rock-Star EP or During a show in support of Rock-Star EP ?
  • stating in a 2023 interview during the Next Generation Leaders with Time ---> stating in a 2023 interview with Time
  • The first rwo paragraphs of 'artistry' have information that can be merged together ("dark and experimental" with expiremnal identity; mala taste related info
  • Consider distilling song descriptions into "Stray Kids' music has elements of psychontrance, trap, etc
  • Experimental music has been Stray Kids' identity since the beginning of their career, combining genres throughout their discography. -----> Experimental music and genre fusion have been the core elements of Stray Kids' music output since the beginning of their career
  • Their debut song, "District 9", is a hybrid genre that combines hip-hop, rock, and EDM with frenetic bass, sirens, EDM breaks, aggressive raps, and hip-hop dance moves. This one confuses me :). They combine hip-hop with hup-hop moves; EDM with EDM breaks?
  • Stray Kids is a "self-producing" idol group whose members have been mostly involved in songwriting and composing, and have sometimes assisted in arranging, even before the official debut. The band's in-house production team, which is called 3Racha, ---> Stray Kids is a "self-producing" idol group even before their official debut, whose members have been involved in majority of songwriting and composing, and have sometimes assisted in arranging. The band's in-house production team, 3Racha,
  • Consider putting invidual examples of lyrics (songs interpretations) into notes



I've listed this article for peer review because it has been getting prepped for FAC over the last couple weeks and I just wanted to get some extra eyes on it to get it further ready before it gets nominated. --ZooBlazer05:09, 1 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

toby

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Heyo. This game looks interesting.toby(t)(c)(rw)(omo)23:30, 3 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

  • You can unlinkUnited States
    The story of the game follows Aloy, a young... ->The game follows Aloy, a young...
    The player uses ranged weapons, a spear and stealth to combat... Is it correct to say the player uses stealth to "combat" enemies?
  • I think so. You sneak up on enemies and attack. --ZooBlazer
Despite being in a post-apocalyptic setting, the game used vibrant colours to depict its world and... ->Despite being in a post-apocalyptic setting, the game utilizes vibrant colours and...
The article flip-flops betweenutilize andutilise
...however, its role-playing mechanics and lack of originality in its gameplay design received some criticism. ->...however, its role-playing mechanics and unoriginal gameplay received some criticism.
She can use a variety of weapons to defeat enemies. ->She uses a variety of weapons to defeat enemies.
In addition to a spear for attacking enemies in melee range... ->In addition to a spear for melee combat...
Weapons can also be customized withmods... Should be unlinked if I'm correct in assuming these weapon mods don't refer to video game moddingAs players explorethe game's world, they...Add a link tocraft
Add a link toinventory
Hunting animals also provides materials to expand Aloy's inventory, allowing her to carry more arrows and consumables. How do the materials expand Aloy's inventory? Does she use them to craft a bigger inventory?
From advice I've received from a peer review atRain World, you're going to have to explain what "save points" and "fast travel" are.
  • Even though there are wiki links for both? --ZooBlazer
    • Yes. The hassle of clicking through links to understand jargon can quickly build up. This is based on advice I've received at my own peer reviews. For example, I've noticed that atHouse of Ashes, rather than saying...and the game has permadeath, you say...and the game continues without the deceased characters, which works.
toby(t)(c)(rw)(omo)19:53, 11 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
  • Save points and fast travel can be accessed by interacting with campfires, once discovered
  • A dialogue wheel is used to communicate with non-player characters (NPC), allowing players to choose different dialogue options to shape Aloy's personality and social interactions. Is it possible to explain how Aloy's personality and social interactions affect the gameplay?
    • I'm not sure there is more to explain. Whatever dialogue option is chosen won't affect anything beyond the conversation. It's basically just Aloy's tone such as should she reply angrily or calmly for example. Other times it isn't tone, it's just what wording to use for a response. --ZooBlazer
  • To continue later...


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I've listed this article for peer review because I've added all the information I can find on it, organized the sources accordingly and expanded greatly. I would like to submit this for GA review but I started this from scratch and would like a look-over before doing so.

Thanks!Watagwaan (talk)20:20, 31 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

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Comments after a quick skim:

  • Refs 8 and 25, and refs 13 and 33, appear to be the same sources and thus can probably be merged.
  • User:Headbomb/unreliable flags KLCC as AI slop. Please doublecheck to see if that source can be used.
  • The reception section follows the "X says Y" format a lot. ConsultWP:RECEPTION on how to write this section more effectively.

Please let me know if you have any questions.Z1720 (talk)03:37, 11 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]


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Hi all, I wrote this article a bit ago and it was recently promoted to GA. The prose feels pretty in-depth to me, and I'm considering taking it to FAC, but would like to gather any other suggestions for improvement that I can first.

Thanks,TheDoctorWho(talk)18:02, 27 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Sourcing notes from Octave

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  • What makesScreen Rant,Forbes (contributor),Cowgirl,Lone Star Live,Atlas of Wonders,The Upcoming, andThe PlaylistWP:HQRS?
  • Inconsistent reference title casing and use of archive links
  • We need italics for major works and quotes for minor works in references, just like with body text
  • Convert hyphens to dashes when used in this manner

UpTheOctave! • 8va?14:43, 5 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]



I've listed this article for peer review because I want to try to nominate the article for GA status, but want to know if I should add to or improve parts of it prior.

Thanks,A.Classical-Futurist (talk)03:25, 21 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

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Comments after a quick skim:

  • In answer to your question: yes I think information should be added to the article because it is quite short. Additional sources for the article can be found atGoogle Scholar, [www.archive.org archive.org],WP:LIBRARY or databases that your local library system has access to.
  • If any sources analyse his artistic style, I would add a section that describes that.
  • I'm not sure why there is a quote in the "Enigma Variations" section. I suggest removing the quote or giving it context.
  • Ref 25 adn 28 are the same ref, so I suggest merging them.
  • Ref 23: "Padgett, Robert W. (2016-06-13)." seems to be a wordpress website. Why is this a reliable source? If it isn't reliable it should bee removed.

I hope this helps.Z1720 (talk)15:07, 24 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you!A.Classical-Futurist (talk)20:20, 25 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Tim riley

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An interesting article, containing much I didn't know. The prose could do with a bit of work to meet Wikipedia's standards.

FirstWP:OVERLINK: you should not have blue links for everyday terms:

  • architect
  • architectural work
  • artist
  • London
  • painting
  • piano
  • secretary
  • Spain
  • treasurer
  • And you should avoid linking more than once to any other page as you do with Edward Elgar (three links) and Malvern (two links)
Individual comments:
  • ""Troyte," by his friend, Edward Elgar" – Wikipedia uses logical punctuation, and so the comma after Troyte should come after the closing quotation mark.
  • "October 27th, 1883" – In Wikipedia the mandatory format for dates in BrE articles is day month year. Nost, nd, rd orth or commas. Thus 27 October 1883.
  • "painting abroad in Spain" – I think your readers will realise without being told that for an English person Spain is abroad.
  • "In Malvern, 1896, Griffith was employed " – missing a second "in"?
  • "He would work there until 1935 … he would remain there until his death" – repetitious use of "he would". A plain past tense would be better in one or both cases.
  • "he design the Toposcope" – past tense needed for the verb.
  • "a number of local houses" – woolly. How many? If the precise number is unknown some indication of how many would be an improvement – a few, quite a lot, many…?
  • "held those position" – plural noun needed.
  • "in which he was elected secretary and treasurer in its inaugural meeting" – strange choices of preposition: one might expect "of which" and "at its".
  • "February 28th, 1899." – date format.
  • "he was elected the club's president after the death of member Hugh Bennett" – hideously clunkyfalse title, and moreover unclear. Was Bennett the incumbent? Better to say so if so: "the death of the incumbent, Hugh Bennett".
  • "Griffith died on January 17th, 1942" – date format
  • "His funeral was held 4 days later, " – usual to use words for numbers up to at least ten.
  • "January 21st" – date format
  • " the tempo Presto," – capital letter not wanted
  • "in their eighteenth century home " – "eighteenth-century" needs a hyphen
  • "published January 1, 2012" – date format.

I hope these points are of help.Tim riley talk11:32, 8 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]



I've listed this article for peer review to know if the it needs improvement and if it is also ready to be nominated as a Good Article candidate.𝙳.𝟷𝟾𝚝𝚑(𝚃𝚊𝚕𝚔)04:59, 28 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]



I've listed this article for peer review because I hope to bring it to Featured Article status. It is currently a GA. Anything is welcome! From my GA, I thought I had addressed everything, but let me know if some things are lacking in terms of an FA. For specific sections to look at: I'd appreciate looking at the Football section, I don't know much about football so I only hope it's accurate and comprehensive per the sources and in relation to his professional football stint. I also hope the tone is not too positive, or too biased for him.

Thanks,jolielover♥talk12:47, 11 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

sallam alaikum. i do know a bit about football (or soccer, i prefer calling it football), and i think the football section is pretty good, and quite comprehensive for what is a relative blip on this article. the tone's not too bad, the sources are good, too. unfortunately i don't have much else to add here, sorry =( but i hoped this helped =)BedsAreBurning aka Sound🇵🇸21:39, 18 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]
It's fine, thanks for reviewing :) yes football is not the reason he's famous at all lol but considering he joined a team and almost bought a club, I guess it's a pretty big deal, so wanted to make sure it was alright.jolielover♥talk04:21, 19 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Drive-by comment

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I notice that this article citesBroadwayWorld. What makes this a reliable source, especially howWP:BROADWAYWORLD says "this website should generally not be used for facts about living persons"?Icepinner (Come to Hakurei Shrine!)09:58, 26 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Octave

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Hi jolie, a few notes on sourcing at an FAC standard:

  • What makes theEvening Standard,Spectrum Culture,Euphoria,Talent Recap,Culted,TBHonest,Hypebeast,United By Pop,Access All Areas,Endole, andVicehigh-quality reliable sources (WP:HQRS andWP:FA?)?
  • Consistent reference title casing and linking of parameters will need to be sorted (WP:CITESTYLE).
  • Album titles and other major works should be placed in italics in reference titles, just like with normal text (MOS:MAJORWORK andMOS:CONFORMTITLE).
  • Simmilarly, songs and other minor works should be placed in quotes – single or double, alternating with other quotes (MOS:MINORWORK andMOS:CONFORMTITLE)
  • 178 is 404-ing, sourl-status should be set todead.

My overall impression is that this is might not be athorough and representative survey of the relevant literature (WP:FA?). While there are a lot of quality newspapers and entertainment publications cited, I see a lot of zines and websites of questionable reliability and quality. I know that entertainment (especially teen entertainment) sourcing can be hard to come by, but is this the best sourcing available for this subject? Thanks,UpTheOctave! • 8va?18:23, 2 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]



I'm interested in taking this article to FAC, after a successful good article nomination. This is my first time at PR, but don't hold back if you notice anything awry with the article. Thanks in advance :)Leafy46 (talk)22:27, 10 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

RedShellMomentum

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This article looks very good to be an FA, but there are some issues with the refs in the article:

  • Ref 1, ref 19, ref 46, and ref 50 should use|publisher=.
  • Ref 4, ref 5, ref 12, ref 13, ref 15, ref 16, ref 18, ref 20, ref 21, ref 23, ref 24, ref 25, ref 27, ref 28, ref 29, ref 32, ref 40, ref 42, ref 44, ref 45, ref 48, ref 51, ref 53, ref 54, ref 55, ref 57, ref 60, and ref 61 should use{{cite magazine}}.
  • Ref 11 should use{{cite news}}.
  • Try to wikilink the rest of the websites in the citation templates.

That's all I could see.RedShellMomentum23:29, 10 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

@RedShellMomentum: Thanks for your comments here! I have applied all your suggestions, except for the last one (I learned early on to link it only the first time a website appears, to avoid overlinking).Leafy46 (talk)19:49, 11 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]
Quick comment that while it is still optional, linking websites in citation templates more than once is permissible perMOS:DUPLINK: "Citations stand alone in their usage, so there is no problem with repeating the same link in many citations within an article".TheDoctorWho(talk)19:45, 27 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]
I see. In that case, I don't mind adding links to the rest of the citations.Leafy46 (talk)00:10, 28 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Camilasdandelions

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  • Remove the song's name in table captions perMOS:HEADER
  • "Creditswere adapted ~". And the section name "Personnel" is enough
  • As "Composition" usually means "Music and lyrics", "Composition and lyrics" is kinda awkward for me
  • "Composition and lyrics" is pretty common for a header, but I don't have anything against shortening it.
  • There's commercial performance content in "Release" section. Why don't you rename the section's name to "Release and reception"?

That's all I see for now. Good luck for FA!Camilasdandelions (✉️)13:15, 14 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]



I've listed this article for peer review because there are many unsourced (as well as outdated) citations, including grammar, cohesive, tone, etc.

Thanks,Absolutiva02:34, 8 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]



I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to nominate it for featured article. It is already a good article and I would appreciate feedback on what's necessary for it to merit FA status.

Thanks,Bronx Langford (talk)14:42, 30 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

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I have added this article to theTemplate:FAC peer review sidebar, where hopefully it will get more reviews. I recommend that you review other articles atWP:FAC to help get an understanding of theFA criteria and to build goodwill amongst editors. I also recommend that you seek aFA mentor who can give comments and advice on achieving your first successful FAC.Z1720 (talk)03:53, 27 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]


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Engineering and technology

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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like feedback on its overall structure, sourcing, and clarity, and to identify any issues that should be addressed before a potential Good Article nomination.

Thanks,Monkegamer123 (talk)18:57, 28 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

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@Monkegamer123: Comments after a quick skim:

  • The lead should be expanded to cover all major aspects of the article. Every level 2 heading should be summarised in the lead.
  • The "Development" and "Reception" sections are quite long. I suggest summarising the text more effectively and using level 3 headings to break up the text
  • Suggest using [iabot.toolforge.org/index.php] to archive the websites. You might also want to expand out these citations by adding access dates and author last names.

Hope this helps.Z1720 (talk)04:30, 29 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]

From JuniperChill (as AfC acceptor)

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As someone that accepted this article, these are my suggestions:

  • The text in the leadDuring development, Miju Games shared two roadmaps in 2022 and 2023 outlining planned features and updates. andThe PC version holds a Metacritic score of 81 out of 100. could be removed. Same could be said about citations in the lead perWP:CITELEAD, provided that the information in the lead is repeated elsewhere in the article.
  • Perhaps the definition of "overwhelmingly positive" and "very positive" should be clarified as not all readers have Steam.
  • Also, if you haven't already, please feel free to read thegood article criteria, and take a look at existing GA video game articles (perhaps those released after 2015) to get an idea of what it should look like. Otherwise, I feel this could be ready for GA!JuniperChill (talk)23:16, 15 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Comment from Monkegamer123

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I’ve addressed previous comments and revised the lead, sections, and citations. Thanks again for your feedback! If you notice anything else that should be improved to prepare the article for Good Article nomination, I’d appreciate any additional suggestions.


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I've listed this article for peer review because it was recommended following FA nomination. The introduction and “structure” and “gardens” section of the Description were already fixed. Everything else was recommended to be reviewed for grammar and phrasing.

Thanks,V.B.Speranza (talk)15:53, 8 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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RoySmith

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One thing that jumps out at me is that the article starts with some relatively unimportant facts. I would start out the Description section with more basic information. ThinkElevator pitch. Imagine the following conversation: "Hi, what have you been working on?" "I'm writing about the Santos Passos Church" "I've never heard of it, tell me about it". You have my attention for one more minute, what do you tell me? I assume you wouldn't start by telling me the elevation.

You'd probably start with something like "It's an 18th century Catholic church in northern Portugal designed by André Soares" Then I imagine you would give a general description of what the building: it has bell tower and a side chapel. There are three rectangular gardens in front with a stone fountain and four granite statues. These seem like the most important things. Telling the reader that it's at an elevation of 571 meters seems like it would be way down on the list.

  • Nowadays, five Oratories remain, nowadays should be replaced with{{asof}}
  • By the early 18th century, the chapel was ruined and a safety hazard the juxtaposition of "ruined" (a verb) and "a safety hazard" (a noun) is strange. Perhaps "... had decayed into ruins and was a safety hazard".
  • seven Oratories were constructed across the city by the Irmandade; only five remain to this day this repeats what was said earlier in the Oratories section.
  • Hi@RoySmith: I’ve made the changes you suggested, although I disagree with the elevator-pitch example for the description section, for that section is meant to... describe. That approach would be more applicable to the opening paragraphs of the article, even though I believe they already serve that purpose well enough. Still, I’m open to further suggestions, thank you.V.B.Speranza (talk)18:00, 2 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Pbritti

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  • "In front of the church are three rectangular gardens..." This whole sentence is sourced tothis. However, that source gives nothing related to that content, instead only containing information about the planting of pansies in the garden one year.
  • The aforementioned source andthis one suggest that the garden in question is actually the municipal square's garden, rather than the church's. The status of this garden should be clearly explained with a proper source.
  • When writing something like "St. John", utilize  to prevent the "St." from hanging separate from the name; seeMOS:NBSP.
  • The materials section is primarily a verbatim copy-and-paste of the Google Translation of the section on materials inthis source. The article needs to summarize, paraphrase, or use quotations. It can not simply translate a source and then repeat it verbatim–that's plagiarism.
  • Oratory andoratories are not supposed to be capitalized in the contexts that they are used in within the article. Only capitalizeOratory when it is used as part of a proper noun.
  • If you have the date of 1594 in the sentence, "It was later replaced" is not necessary.
  • I'm not seeing a compelling reason to not translate "Irmandade" to "brotherhood" after the first mention.
  • Many of the citations identify that sources are in European Portuguese or Portuguese; all European Portuguese sources should be properly labelled as such. Relatedly, some Portuguese sources are not identified as in Portuguese, European or otherwise.
  • "it was blessed the same year." Is this simply a blessing of the church, a liturgical rite, or the church's formal consecration?
  • These is a CS1 error appearing for the citation currently number as 18.

More comments may follow. Best, ~Pbritti (talk)05:32, 11 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]


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I've listed this article for peer review because...I want to pursue nomination for this article to be good article and needs feedback for itThanks,Agus Damanik (talk)02:25, 25 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

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@Agus Damanik: Comments after a quick skim:

  • There are "citation needed" tags in the lead. If these are cited in the article, they don't need to be cited in the lead perWP:LEADCITE. If they are not in the article body, they should probably be added to the article body or removed from the lead.
  • I added a "citation needed" tag to the "Controversy" section. Also, typically Wikipedia doesn't use that section heading anymore due toPOV and neutrality concerns (as it implies that there is something controversial). Instead, I would give it a title that explains what the section is about.
  • Ref 12 and 15 from the New York Times are the same source and can be merged together.

Hope this helps.Z1720 (talk)04:19, 27 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the comment. Already adressedAgus Damanik (talk)01:22, 28 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]



I've listed this article for peer review because I am seeking to nominate it for FA status sometime in the near future. I improved this article to GA earlier this month and now think it's comprehensive enough to qualify for FAC. I'm primarily looking for advice on cohesion, necessary condensing/elaboration of key topics, or the reliability of the provided sources. This would be my first time nominating an article for FA, so any comments are greatly appreciated!

Thanks,TheBrickGraphic (talk)20:07, 13 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]


Geography and places

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History

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I've listed this article for peer review, so that I can get editor feedback before re-applying for FAC. I will also review other articles looking for PR. Any feedback is greatly appreciated, thanks.

Thanks,Metalicat (talk)23:38, 29 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]



I've listed this article for peer review because I am considering putting it forward for Good Article status, but it would be nice to have some feedback first.

Thanks,PatGallacher (talk)18:43, 25 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

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Comments after a quick skim:

  • I added some "citation needed" templates to the article. These will need to be resolved before a GAN.
  • For the "Fictional portrayals" section, I would only include mentions where the book/movie/piece of media has a Wikipedia article. In other words, if it is not notable enough to have a Wikipedia article, it is probably not notable enough to be included in this list.

Once these are resolved, I think this can go toWP:GAN, where a reviewer will give more thorough comments.Z1720 (talk)15:31, 31 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]


Previous peer review


I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get this article ready for an FAC, and am looking forward to comments to help this improve.

Thanks,Z1720 (talk)00:17, 25 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Driveby comments from MediaKyle

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This article is fascinating, thanks for working on it. I have a couple driveby comments to throw at you:

  • The wikilinks in the lead for "pamphlet" and "Incitement to violence" are right next to each other, causing an overlink issue.
  • The photo of David Duggan is oddly placed. Perhaps it could be moved down into the leaflets section?
  • Duggan seems to be first mentioned in the list, but then his full name and the wikilink isn't given until the following paragraph. I might add the link in the list instead.
  • Every night, Social Crediters drove to the Fort Saskatchewan Penitentiary, where the men were being held, to show their support. ... Every night for how long? Was it for the entire duration of their imprisonment?
  • The incident was part of a series of events that decreased Aberhart's political influence in Alberta ... a bit more detail about what those events were and how they relate to this wouldn't hurt.
  • Your ISBNs are formatted inconsistently. However you prefer to space them out, they should all be done the same way.
  • Some ISBNs use the 10-number and others the 12-number. I have been told in the past on Wikipedia that the number used is important and not to change it without good reason. I see that they all have dashes, so I think they are formatted correctly.Z1720 (talk)16:30, 5 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

That's all I got. Great work! Cheers,MediaKyle (talk)13:01, 31 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

  • @MediaKyle: Thanks for your comments. Anything else to add?Z1720 (talk)16:30, 5 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
    I don't think so, looks great! I just went over it again and fixed some nitpicky things that might have come up at your FAC. The only other thing I noticed is that University of Toronto Press is wikilinked in the references, but no other publishers are. I'd either remove that wikilink, or add links for the rest. I like to link them myself but some people think it's clutter... As far as the article content itself goes, I think it's quite well-polished. Cheers,MediaKyle (talk)16:56, 5 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]



I've listed this article for peer review because this historical event on the island of Hispaniola explains the reason behind its division. I understand it is an episode of Caribbean history that is vital to know and emphasize, which is why I want to ensure it meets the highest quality standards.

Thanks,Risantana (talk)10:14, 24 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]



Thisarticle is too long. I would like to reduce it in size by 10 to 20%. I'm looking for suggestions on content that is not needed—and content that definitely needs to be in. Do not worry too much about other things. In the meantime, I will be checking each citation, running archive references (when it is not so busy), and running reFill. Also open to other suggestions, but the size is my main issue. The goal is to get the quality up to Good Article.Thanks,TwoScars (talk)20:33, 14 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

I've made some fairly axe-swinging cuts to the early parts of the article -- I think this might be a case where it's easier to show rather than tell. Obviously, feel free to revert, rework, etc, particularly where I've muddled up the facts. A few general observations:
  • It's usually best to start from the key story and work up from there. When looking at the forces involved, for example, the reader wants to know how many soldiers were involved androughly what sort of equipment they had -- did one side have artillery and the other not? The previous version got quickly bogged down in what seemed to be small details, such as whether a particular regiment of cavalry had a particular sort of carbine -- in the context of 16,000 soldiers or so on a side, that's probably not information to put in the main summary of the forces.
  • Similarly, we often get bogged down with the different commanders and things get difficult to follow -- we probably only need the overall commanders until we get into the narrative of the battle. You can always introduce e.g. a brigade commander or a regimental commander if his role becomes important.
  • Try to keep things in chronological order as much as possible, and there's no need to continually say that something was "then" a certain distance from somewhere else -- again, think about what's important for the reader to understandthis story.
In general, I think it would help to "zoom out" a bit -- think about what the broad strokes of the overall narrative are, then make sure the article foregrounds those key moves before getting into the weeds of the smaller details.UndercoverClassicistT·C15:28, 24 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]



I've listed this article for peer review because I have tarted my work on the Trafalgar campaign, starting with this. I don't have any of the main sources, and have only just updated the sources.

Thanks to everyone replying in advance,Thelifeofan413 (talk)11:40, 28 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]



I've listed this article for peer review because I want to later reassess the article for GA, I would do everything to have my first GA…

Thanks,Protoeus (talk)01:22, 18 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

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@Protoeus: This is an ambitious article to have as your first GA. Perhaps consider an article with a smaller scope. Here are some comments if still interested:

  • There should be a citation at the end of every paragraph, minimum (except the lead and other exceptions). The article currently has some uncited text.
  • At over 14,000 words, the article is consideredWP:TOOBIG. I suggestspinning out text that can go into other articles and summarising what is left more effectively.
  • "8 Spies Who Leaked Atomic Bomb Intelligence to the Soviets"." is not considered a reliable source and should be replaced or removed.
  • I am not a fan of block quotes, and I think these can be removed and summarised instead.

I hope this helps.Z1720 (talk)23:24, 27 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Borsoka

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This is an important topic, and the amount of research invested in the article is evident and greatly appreciated. That said, the text is currently too long and should be reduced by at least 15%. Certain sections — for example, the discussion of the Pan-European Picnic — could be substantially shortened without any loss of substance.I would also like to raise some concerns regarding the sourcing. While the article cites a very large number of references, many of these address only specific (and often marginal) aspects of the Cold War rather than treating it as a coherent whole. In order to reflect the subject as it is presented in peer-reviewed scholarship, the article should rely predominantly on sources that are directly specialised in its core topic. Without this focus, it is difficult to ensure that each aspect of the Cold War is presented in proportion to its scholarly significance.Borsoka (talk)02:47, 21 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]


Natural sciences and mathematics

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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to eventually make this article reach Featured Article status and I'm asking people's opinions to see if there's any problem to fix.

Thanks,GrenadinesDes (talk)14:49, 4 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

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@GrenadinesDes: I have added this article to theTemplate:FAC peer review sidebar. Please consider reviewing other articles listed there. Please also consider reviewing articles atWP:FAC. This will help build goodwill amongst FAC reviewers and help clear the list, making your nomination stand out to potential reviewers. I also suggest seeking aFA mentor who can leave comments here and help give advice on getting your first FA.Z1720 (talk)03:51, 11 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]


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Aquilegia, also known as columbines, are a large genus of plants with a number of interesting properties—including being my favorite flowers. I hope to take this article to FAC once this review is complete. Best, ~Pbritti (talk)04:17, 1 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

The wordcyanophore appears to be misused in the article.Wiktionary agrees with my understanding the word applies to cells/structures rather than organisms. I also don't find it obvious that blue flowers should be correlated to the presence of cyanogenic glycosides; a citation is needed to support that position that inAquilegia cyanogenic glycosides arerestricted to the blue-flowered species.Lavateraguy (talk)11:50, 1 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

  • I think you're right, but a few sources (they're translations) seem to have made the same error I made. Thanks for teaching me this. I don't know if there's any implication that the only blue-floweringAquilegia have cyanogenic glycosides, but indicates that cyanogenic glycosides are known for sure in the blue flowers. I've fixed it in the article. Best, ~Pbritti (talk)17:33, 9 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

"The association of columbine with the 1999 Columbine High School massacre has led to use of the names aquilegia and granny's bonnet used in horticultural circles as a means of avoiding the stigmatized name" — I'd be hard put to find a reference from that long ago, but the use of "aquilegia" as a vernacular name (particularly in horticulture) goes back long before 1999 in Britain. The low profile of the school massacre outside of the USA also makes the case for concluding it had any lasting stigmatisation effect on name usage hard to prove. TheGuardian column piece cited doesn't give much of a basis for it; it is just one author's opinion. I'd be inclined to drop it as irrelevant trivia. -MPF (talk)17:29, 4 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

  • Sure, done. In the US outside of gardening circles,columbine almost exclusively refers to the shooting (besides in Colorado, where the flower was sufficiently well known under that name). I'd like to source that, but nobody seems to have written this self-evident reality. Best, ~Pbritti (talk)17:33, 9 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

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I have added this article to theTemplate:FAC peer review sidebar. Please consider reviewing other articles listed there.Z1720 (talk)03:54, 11 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]


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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to improve it to the level of GA-class. As this is the first article I've ever created (which is done by draft), I currently do not have experience on how to improve a C-class article to B-class, let alone meet GA standards. Therefore I'd like some suggestions and guidance for improving the article.

Thanks,Electorus (talk)15:51, 11 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Update. I've added a new section about the properties of the number. Hopefully this improves the quality of the article closer to B-Class.Electorus (talk)09:26, 15 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Electorus. Have you ever thought of rewriting them into prose and adding more sources for each? Also, since the article is ridiculously obnoxious, you could truncate the section "Selected 13-digit numbers (1,000,000,000,001–9,999,999,999,999)" off. You could also try what the number 1,000,000,000,000 is by explaining its predecessor and successor and writing its properties, given the reliable sources you have found, as long as you need to follow theWP:NUM/G. You can see some samples of GA about numbers like1 (number) and69 (number).Dedhert.Jr (talk)03:05, 10 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I see. I wrote this article in a way based on related large number articles like1,000,000 and1,000,000,000, so it looks more like a list of numbers in an order of magnitude rather than an article focusing on the number specifically. I'll try to adjust the structure and find more sources according to your advice. This may be harder than both GA articles you suggested though, because both 1 and 69 are more common in real life than this number.Electorus (talk)08:35, 10 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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I've listed this article for peer review because it has been substantially expanded and sourced. Feedback on structure, sourcing, neutrality, and overall readiness for future assessment processes (e.g. GA) would be appreciated.

Thanks,Tmslv ptrcvc (talk)19:12, 3 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

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@Tmslv ptrcvc: Comments after a quick skim:

  • I added some citation needed tags to the article. These should be resolved before a GAN.
  • There are a lot of one-sentence paragraphs in the article. Most paragraphs should be about 4-6 sentences. Merge some of these paragraphs together.
  • Ref 9: "Discogs" is not considered a reliable source on Wikipedia. This should be removed or replaced.
  • Refs 26 & 51, 38 & 52, and 50 & 57 seem to be the same sources and can be merged together.

Hope this helps.Z1720 (talk)04:04, 11 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]


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Philosophy and religion

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Previous peer review


This article's already gone through a peer review once, but now considering that it's considerably different from the peer-reviewed version months ago, I request another peer review for this.

Several things that I kindly want reviewers to inform me include coherence & cohesion, whether some sections should be grouped together, and potential sourcing problems.

Thanks,Strongman13072007 (talk)04:49, 16 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Social sciences and society

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In 1998, South Carolina repealed its interracial marriage ban, which had been unenforceable since the 60s following a Supreme Court ruling. The repeal of the defunct language faced 38% opposition.

I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to make the push from good article to featured, and I would like to know if it is up to that standard.

Thanks,Delcoan (talk)16:21, 20 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Olliefant

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  • In the lead link "interracial marriage" toInterracial marriage in the United States and cut the see also link
  • The lead needs an expansion
  • In the lead, "House Speaker" should be "State House Speaker" and link toSpeaker of the South Carolina House of Representatives
  • I'd explain what Loving v Virginia is in the lead but I'll leave it to you
  • Under "Background", delink "U.S. states"
  • "Gov." should be full word
  • The SC constitution should be linked on the first mention not the second
  • "anti-miscegenation provisions" is linked twice
  • Under "Endorsements", both "State representative" and "State senator" are linked far too many times
  • The names should be sorted alphabetically
  • Party names aren't italicized
  • The tables under "Subsequent polling" need to comply withMOS:DTAB
  • The page should be included onTemplate:1998 United States elections andTemplate:Elections in South Carolina sidebar
  • In the refs "Newspapers" -> "Newspapers.com"
  • The refs are listing the source as Newspapers.com as being via the newspaper, this should be the other way around
  • Ref 10 and 20, link "The Washington Post" for consistency. Also mark them as "subscription needed"
  • Any citation using all caps in the title shouldn't be perMOS:ALLCAPS
  • Alot of year ranges in the page haveMOS:DASH violations
  • A large number of citations are improperly using DMY dates and not the correct MDY format
That's what I foundOlliefant (she/her)22:03, 8 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Ellie

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  • All state legislators should be redlinked (notable perWP:NPOL).
  • For FA, I don't think the Background section is sufficiently comprehensive. I'd add a map of who voted yes/no/didn't vote (like I didhere).
  • I'd add a table of the polls to the polling section (keep the prose, but present it as a table also; again you can see the article I linked as an example).
  • Somewhere in the body should explain that this was held alongside the1998 South Carolina elections on November 3 (currently, the date is in the infobox but not cited in the body anywhere, and the connection to other elections on the same ballot is not mentioned at all).
Hope this helps :) These are mostly just things I've learned from trying to write about ballot measures myself.Elli (talk |contribs)14:14, 9 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]



I've listed this article for peer review because I'm preparing it for a potential Good Article nomination and would like feedback on:

  • NPOV balance – The article documents significant criticism (2023 National Academies findings on lack of outcome data, eight legal cases) alongside official FAA/ALPA positions and a "Support and endorsements" subsection. Does the balance feel appropriate?
  • Source quality – Sources include National Academies reports, federal court decisions (D.C. Circuit), EEOC press releases, DOT OIG reports, major newspapers (WSJ, Seattle Times, Reuters, Washington Post, NYT), and peer-reviewed journals. Any concerns about reliability?
  • Structure and prose – Article covers history, economic justification, program structure, criticism, testing protocols, legal cases, international expansion, and legislative reform. Is the organization logical and readable?
  • Lead section – Does it adequately summarize the article perWP:LEAD?
  • Any gaps – Missing aspects that should be covered?

Thanks for your time.

LumenStoneEditor (talk)09:31, 20 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Provisionally assess as a C-Class and Mid-importance article: has sufficient information, sources, sections, image. At least 250 words of text. This is part of my ongoing project to re-assess all Legal stubs. Will gladly re-assess after a few days to allow for others' input.Bearian (talk)18:27, 25 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

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Comments after a quick skim:

  • At about 10,800 words, the article isWP:TOOBIG. Considerspinning out larger sections and summarising the prose more effectively.
  • "No medical or clinical credentials are indicated in program documentation" Why is this important to mention about several participants?
  • I added several "citation needed" templates. These should be resolved before a nomination.
  • I added a yellow "duplicate citations" banner using a script: This should be resolved before a nomination

Hope this helps.Z1720 (talk)05:18, 31 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the thorough review. I've addressed your concerns:
Citation needed tags: All ten{{cn}} tags have been resolved with appropriate sources:
  • Key program personnel – Added refs to P4HR-mission and FAAHIMS-reform for credentials concerns
  • Unverified statistics ecosystem – Added NAS2023 and NAS2023-Ch5
  • Entry points list – Added HIMS-pre (Smith 2019 diagram)
  • Support and endorsements – Added ALPA-HIMStestimony and A4A-support
  • Policy author credentials – Added P4HR-mission and FAAHIMS-reform with direct quotes
  • Phase reset provision – Added Frazier2023
  • PEth testing reliability – Added USDTL-FAQ
  • Legal cases intro – Added cbs-leverage and NAS2023
  • Disbrow – Added ChicagoBusiness-Disbrow
  • Pilot-led advocacy – Added P4HR-about, HIMSVoices, NAS2023
Credentials language: Consolidated the repetitive "no credentials" mentions from individual entries into the Key program personnel introduction, now attributed to named reform advocacy sources (Pilots for HIMS Reform, FAA HIMS Program Information Center) per NPOV. The concern is relevant because these non-physician authored documents (Recovery Contract, Last Chance Agreement, Monitor Guidelines) govern career-ending decisions affecting pilots' medical certifications.
Duplicate citations: Resolved.
Article length: Acknowledged. The Legal cases section (~2,500 words, nine cases) is the most logical candidate for a spin-out toHIMS program legal cases or similar. Will address after other GA criteria are met.
Also added Park v. FAA (2024), an NTSB ALJ reversal of FAA certification denial, bringing Legal cases to nine total.
Thanks again for the detailed feedback.LumenStoneEditor (talk)22:22, 31 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]



I've listed this article for peer review because the upcoming presidential elections in Iraq is going to be hosted near the end of this month. Since this is the first article that I have created, I would like some feedback on what I could improve on.

These include:

1. What I could do instead in general next time
  1. Did I do something wrong with the references?
  2. Did I violate some sort of wikipedia policy unknowningly?
  3. Anything else that I may need to focus on?


2. What I should've done instead specifically with the article
  1. Did I leave out some important details?
  2. Did I violate some sort of wikipedia policy unknowningly?
  3. Did I leave out some important details?
  4. Did my writing tone contradictsWP:NPOV? Any other reasons on why it may be considered as "bad"?
  5. Anything else that I may need to focus on?

Thanks,GuesanLoyalist (talk)08:48, 18 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]


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I've listed this article for peer review to prepare it for afeatured article candidacy. I would be interested to learn what changes are required to fulfill thefeatured article criteria, but I'm also open to more casual improvement ideas.Phlsph7 (talk)09:52, 4 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

I have not had a chance to look through the article in detail. But I think we all know that first impressions are important. The first impression I had was that the image was not what one would call "professional" or high quality. Changing that would be a good 1st step. Cheers.Yesterday, all my dreams... (talk)22:41, 4 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
HelloYesterday, all my dreams... and thanks for your feedback. Cognition is a very abstract and general term so it is difficult to visualize it in a representative manner. The presentation of different cognitive activities, as the current image attempts, is one approach. Do you have an idea about how the image could be modified to improve it? As an alternative, we could also simply remove the image: lead images are not required and no image may better than a bad image.Phlsph7 (talk)12:46, 5 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
Hi there. Yes, it is a very abstract issue, as you said. And I wish I knew what it is! In the late 1970's a young yours truly attended a meeting with several professors discussing the issue. They reached no agreement. I have since thought about it in the consciousness context, but still in the woods. Any way, regarding the image please take a look at[3]. I like this one[4] but please choose any high quality one you like. CheersYesterday, all my dreams... (talk)03:47, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not sure that there are good alternatives, so I went ahead and removed the image.Phlsph7 (talk)10:19, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]



I've listed this article for peer review as part of Wiki Education assignment for Psychology 220A (Fall 2025).

Thank you!220AZiIqTLIQer (talk)16:29, 7 December 2025 (UTC)[reply]



Wrote this article yesterday based in large part from journal articles and dug-up sources from around the time. Looking for feedback to make sure it's accessible to a layperson, informative about the election (i:e, doesn't gloss over any necessary attributes while focusing too much on small details), and doesn't contain too much jargon or waffle. --LivelyRatification (talk)23:04, 24 November 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I think it's a solid B-Class article. I don't do FA or GA reviews because it's contentious and I'm too stressed out in real life.Bearian (talk)04:33, 24 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Olliefant

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  • The county maps are unsourced
  • Under "Background", [Sioux City, Iowa|Sioux City] -> [Sioux City] perMOS:NOTBROKEN
  • The image needs alttext
  • Mention Newt Gingrich was speaker of the house, also mention his home state as he wasn't from Iowa
  • Link "Missouri" and "New Jersey"
  • "New-Jersey" -> "New Jersey"
  • Under "Aftermath", "opposition in the House of Representatives" -> "opposition in the House"
  • Link "Democrats"
  • The LA Times sources should say "Subscription needed"
  • A few of the sources haveMOS:DASH violations
That's what I foundOlliefant (she/her)19:02, 6 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
I will respond to most of these comments later, but I will say, is the issue with the county maps that no direct citation is provided in the "Results by county" description? The results by county are linked to at the file page, and cited in the Results and reaction section (at the table header for each result). I did not include a table for results by county as I figured this would likely clutter up the page, though I could include it if necessary.LivelyRatification (talk)11:33, 7 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
@Olliefant: I have acted on most of these comments, with a few exceptions. I'm not sure what change you wanted for the county maps as said above, I have tried to fix the MOS:DASH violations but I may have missed some, and I'm not sure how to add Gingrich's home state as none of the sources I have relating to this directly state it. Would it be good to just find a basic, unrelated source about Gingrich that says this? --LivelyRatification (talk)03:07, 10 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
The lack of citation in THIS article is a problem. An unrelated source for the home state would be fineOlliefant (she/her)03:21, 10 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]
@Olliefant: As I said, the county results are cited further down in the article (though not explicitly stated in the article, they are referenced at each of the result tables), but I have added a citation to the infobox as well. I am happy to make this more visible if necessary but not entirely sure how/what I'd need to do. Gingrich's home state has also been added with a citation to another LA Times article.LivelyRatification (talk)03:38, 10 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]


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I've listed this article for peer review because I am in the process of a slow, but steady, work in making a 'good/featured' topic for Wikipedia involving theMemphis Chicks of theSouthern League, similar concept to my mentor,NatureBoyMD as a way to promote minor league baseball talk on Wikipedia. Unfortunately, this page can't be featured due to its list but having this peer review will help with the process.

Thanks,TBJ (talk)18:45, 10 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from NatureBoyMD

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  • You define “perfect game” in the lede, but don’t mention Memphis having any. As they didn’t, I'd follow the defining sentence with “No Chicks pitchers achieved a perfect game.” (Or similar)
  • (Finlayson) ”He walked and struck out two batters during the game.” The cited news story mentions two walks but says nothing about strikeouts. Also, if true, it may be clearer to say ”He walked two batters and struck out two during the game.”
  • ”This game was coincidentally the minor league debut of Bo Jackson.” I’d remove this sentence as it truly seemscoincidental unless Jackson played some major role in the game (preventing a run or runner, etc).
  • ”The game had a defensive play made by Chicks' third baseman Joe Randa ending the inning with a double play.” This feels out of place. Maybe indicate which inning and emphasize that it keep the no-hitter going or, alternatively, prevented it from being broken up.
  • ”The Chicks had chances to win the game…” Again, I’d mention the inning.
  • ”…Holdridge completed the same feat to complete the no-hit bid.” Does that mean he also struck out 3 and walked 1? Maybe make it “Holdridge also retired three batters on strikes while walking one.”
  • I think you should mention Karl Thompson catching the last two no-hitters.
  • Everything else looks fine.NatureBoyMD (talk)18:14, 14 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]



I've listed this article for peer review because I hope to nominate the article for featured list status. Anything is welcome.

Thanks,Loibird90 (talk)03:59, 30 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Arconning

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Here'll be some comments from me.

  • "He made his first screen appearance in Siete Infantes de Lara (1949)", source? Can't find any in either of the two sources. + The movie was published in 1950.
  • " He is regarded as the most awarded Filipino actor in history.", please supply a source or a quotation from either of the two sources as I can't find any information regarding this.
  • "Far East Film Festival named him one of the most prolific actors in Asia." to "The Far East Film Festival named him one of the most prolific actors in Asia."
  • "He has won a record of sixFAMAS Award for Best Actor", "He has won a record of six FAMAS Awards forBest Actor"
  • "Garcia has also won fiveFAMAS Award for Best Supporting Actor", "Garcia has also won five FAMAS Awards forBest Supporting Actor"
  • "He has won fiveFAMAS Award for Best Director", "He has won five FAMAS Awards forBest Director"
  • "For his portrayal of the patriarch of a Chinese Filipino clan in the family drama", must need a source.
  • "For his portrayal of an aged gay man in the comedy drama Bwakaw (2012)", source
  • "Further acclaim came with his portrayal of a closeted retired...", source + wikilinkcloseted

Arconning (talk)16:09, 31 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, thanks for taking the time and I believe I've addressed your concerns:
  • Fixed the year and added source.
  • Added a quotation and specific page in the existing source to support the "most awarded Filipino actor in history" statement.
  • Fixed the rest of the concerns: added sources, fixed wikilinks etc...
Loibird90 (talk)02:09, 1 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]



I'm thinking of promoting this article to featured list status, given there are plenty of sources and information for that to be possible. However, I have not promoted a featured list before, so I'd appreciate some tips on how to improve the current article, particularly with the placement of sources. I'm also pretty sure there is no "good list" category, so hopefully I am reviewing this correctly. :)

My thought process is the following: I'm currently working on getting every franchise to have at least one high-quality reliable source (most notably replacing all of theGame Rant sources). I think the table formatting is fine, but my only suggestion might be to remove the "reference" column in the table and move all of the sources to either the initial/latest game release to verify those claims, or to verify what the series is about. While the reference column is nice, it doesn't directly confirm what is stated in each section of the table, so moving the references could potentially fix that issue. Otherwise, all franchises in the table seem good to me. The only one that I have the slightest bit of doubt for is theKen Griffey Jr. Baseball series, as the best source I could find is fromOperation Sports, a source that I have no basis for reliability. Also, any suggestions to improve the lead section as a summary for ALL of Nintendo's franchises would be greatly appreciated, whether it is adding information or rewording part of it to be more professional.

Feel free to help me out on this potentially large-scale project! -Z-Gamer Guys (talk)07:46, 25 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

"For lists of more specific Nintendo games, see the lists of games on Nintendo consoles." should be a hatnoteVacant0(talkcontribs)10:03, 30 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]
Yeah, I wasn't too sure what to do with that sentence given there was already a "see also" section. This has been added.Z-Gamer Guys (talk)18:29, 30 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]



I've listed this article for peer review because I have contributed significantly to it, and would like to know how else I can improve this article, and what issues persist within. I would like to nominate this forfeatured list status soon.

Thanks,Phlogiston Enthusiast (talk)20:34, 9 January 2026 (UTC)[reply]

How do I close this?

@Phlogiston Enthusiast: SeeWikipedia:Peer review/Guidelines#Step 4: Closing a review for instructions. -MPGuy2824 (talk)15:30, 15 February 2026 (UTC)[reply]


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