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This is anarchive of past discussions onWikipedia:Cleanup.Do not edit the contents of this page. If you wish to start a new discussion or revive an old one, please do so on thecurrent main page.

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This page consists of entries that have been addressed and cleaned up, or are over one year old.

2018 posts

June

~~George Jacob – Several cleanup issues denoted by maintenance tags in the article.~~North America¹⁰⁰⁰03:16, 5 June 2018 (UTC)

The above core concerns above were addressed byUser:Drewmutt andUser:MarnetteD.North America¹⁰⁰⁰23:06, 5 June 2018 (UTC)

~~Eric Block – 16 bare urls.~~North America¹⁰⁰⁰20:06, 3 June 2018 (UTC)

Fixed byUser:MarnetteD.North America¹⁰⁰⁰23:07, 5 June 2018 (UTC)

Cooking on the Wild Side – 15 bare urls.North America¹⁰⁰⁰20:00, 3 June 2018 (UTC)

Fixed byUser:Derek R Bullamore.North America¹⁰⁰⁰23:08, 5 June 2018 (UTC)

~~Dominica citizenship by investment programme – Many bare urls and reference formatting errors.~~North America¹⁰⁰⁰21:47, 1 June 2018 (UTC)

Cleaned up byUser:MarnetteD.North America¹⁰⁰⁰18:29, 8 June 2018 (UTC)

~~London Mint Office – 13 bare urls.~~North America¹⁰⁰⁰08:40, 1 June 2018 (UTC)

Fixed byDerek R Bullamore.North America¹⁰⁰⁰20:01, 3 June 2018 (UTC)

~~Michael J. Carey (professor) – Unclear citation style.~~North America¹⁰⁰⁰12:18, 17 June 2018 (UTC)

FixedAmericanAir88 (talk)12:19, 22 June 2018 (UTC)

April

~~Dodge College of Film and Media Arts has inline URLs, peacock POV, and seems misleading.~~ ~~Z75SG61Ilunqpdb (talk)02:31, 28 April 2018 (UTC)

DoneAmericanAir88 (talk)19:17, 18 July 2018 (UTC)

The Land of Open Graves – anthropology book. Self-referencing (could be changed to sfn) and too much content. --Bbarmadillo (talk)08:38, 24 April 2018 (UTC)

Comment – The book has received some notable reviews:[1],[2] (PDF),[3]. According toWP:NBOOK that probably bestows notability, but the WP article should be about the book's influence and should not repeat the book itself. Also, the article could possibly be nominated for deletion because there is no article about the author. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs)15:23, 24 April 2018 (UTC)

Done ...at least in terms of cleaning up he weaknesses noted byUser:Bbarmadillo back in April. I alerted theBooks Project about the article and some folks there cut down the self-referencing summaries substantially. The article still has lingering notability issues though. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs)17:21, 1 July 2018 (UTC)

Austin Irving – American contemporary artist. She is notable (LA Times, Slate, WIRED mentions her works) but the article simply has too much information esp. at the Bibliography section. --Bbarmadillo (talk)20:05, 8 April 2018 (UTC)

I also notifiedAustinIrving that they should not be editing this article and should properly declare COI. --Bbarmadillo (talk)20:12, 8 April 2018 (UTC)

NDeleted This page has been deleted (not by me) due to it being "Unambiguous advertising or promotion". --LichWizard talk 14:44, 9 April 2018 (UTC)

LichWizard Looks like it has raised from ashes :) --Bbarmadillo (talk)19:26, 9 April 2018 (UTC)

Bbarmadillo So it has :P --LichWizard talk 19:49, 9 April 2018 (UTC)

Bbarmadillo Well, I guess it's been deleted again... --LichWizard talk 14:53, 10 April 2018 (UTC)

Melodorum siamense -This is a tree species native to Thailand, but it seems whoever wrote this article wasn't a native English speaker; there's several examples of syntax/grammatical errors throughout the body of the article. --Aanaranjo10 (talk)18:16, 5 April 2018 (UTC)

Done I cleaned up the grammar and such, but the article doesn't cite any sources, so I have no idea if it's accurate or not. --LichWizard talk 21:31, 8 April 2018 (UTC)

~~Yang Chia-Yun – Taiwanese film directors, needs references de-duplication.~~ --Bbarmadillo (talk)17:55, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

Done Cleaned up the duplicated references. --LichWizard talk 18:19, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

~~Trans-Saharan Railway – Bare urls.~~North America¹⁰⁰⁰07:50, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

Done Fixed duplicated and bare URLs --LichWizard talk 11:34, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

~~Mineral industry of Europe – Bare urls.~~North America¹⁰⁰⁰21:42, 15 April 2018 (UTC)

Fixed byUser:MarnetteD.North America¹⁰⁰⁰11:42, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

~~Coretta Scott King~~ – the entire article is disorganized, and uses many instances of unidiomatic American English. Sections are all right, but many anecdotes are sort strung together or pop up randomly. The article as a whole reads like a high school essay.Matuko)22:33, 10 April 2018 (UTC)

I think it's a beautiful article!Nina07011960 (talk)

Done - Tags for "copy edit" and "personal opinion/essay" were placed on 10 April byMatuko (who also commented above). Several editors tackled typos and grammar errors and in my judgment the problem is resolved so I removed that tag. Meanwhile, Matuko (if you read this), please give some examples of how the article looked too much "like a high school essay". Respectfully and professionally, I must disagree because almost all claims are supported byreliable sources and a few minor oversights already have the standard "citation needed" tag. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs)19:12, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

Thank you. I stand by my issues with the article, and have replied to your comment on my talk page with examples. I don't have a dog in this hunt other than providing readers with a factual and readable article on Mrs. King (as we all want), and if I am alone in this, I'm perfectly fine with that. I used phraseology (i.e. "high school essay") from Wikipedia's guidelines regarding encyclopedic tone and article cleanup and certainly not just to offend. --Matuko (Talk)23:49, 18 April 2018 (UTC)

~~Ashley Avis~~ – American screenwriter and director. The article is written like advertising, needs cleanup to remove puffery. --Bbarmadillo (talk)15:37, 24 April 2018 (UTC)

Done, fixed by other editors

~~Racine Art Museum~~ needs Wiki help as not sure how to comply with requests.Ramfan101 (talk)17:19, 19 April 2018 (UTC)Ramfan101

DoneLeschnei (talk)13:24, 21 May 2018 (UTC)

Nina Gamble Kennedy – please advise as to exactly what text should be deleted for the article to be "fixed."Nina07011960 (talk) DOB removed FixedNina07011960 (talk)

March

A. & L. Tirocchi Gowns -- nice article but way too long. --Bbarmadillo (talk)20:37, 27 March 2018 (UTC)

Partly done improved references a bit. --Bbarmadillo (talk)19:59, 16 March 2018 (UTC)

Done Finished the cleanup. --Bbarmadillo (talk)20:58, 17 March 2018 (UTC)

~~Aaron Sim – requires clean up to remove any promotional tone and kindly read all the resources for fact checking thanks :)~~Shenalyn2018 (talk)02:47, 11 March 2018 (UTC)

NDeleted per discussion atWikipedia:Articles for deletion/Aaron Sim (2nd nomination).North America¹⁰⁰⁰06:05, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

~~Galbraith (business) – requires clean up do to input from someone working at the company after they underwent a rebrand.~~ --RMGDKC (talk)15:53, 8 March 2018 (UTC)
~~De Dolle Brouwers – Bare urls.~~North America¹⁰⁰⁰15:17, 29 March 2018 (UTC)

Fixed byUser:MarnetteD.North America¹⁰⁰⁰22:07, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

Gerald Murray (Talent manager) – the article is simply too long and not well-referenced.— Precedingunsigned comment added byBbarmadillo (talk •contribs)21:03, 31 March 2018 (UTC)

UPD: Nominated for the deletion. --Bbarmadillo (talk)11:46, 1 April 2018 (UTC)

NDeleted per discussion atWikipedia:Articles for deletion/Gerald Murray (Talent manager).North America¹⁰⁰⁰20:02, 8 April 2018 (UTC)

~~The Raphael Hotel – article about an hotel made by someone who doesn't know how to make references.~~ --Bbarmadillo (talk)18:59, 30 March 2018 (UTC)

Partly done the text is OK. There are still too many links at "External links" that should be turned into text references. I did part of the job. A bit more effort is needed. --Bbarmadillo (talk)20:15, 3 April 2018 (UTC)

Done Finished the cleanup. --Bbarmadillo (talk)20:54, 4 April 2018 (UTC)

February

~~Deadcuts – 52 bare urls.~~North America¹⁰⁰⁰12:55, 9 February 2018 (UTC)

Fixed byMarnetteD, and thank you.North America¹⁰⁰⁰11:49, 15 February 2018 (UTC)

~~Pretzelmaker – Bare urlsand reference errors~~.North America¹⁰⁰⁰10:58, 9 February 2018 (UTC)

Fixed: Has been addressed by other users, and I performed some follow-up minor edits.North America¹⁰⁰⁰19:56, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

~~Cyril Ramaphosa – The information that should in a box on the right appears in the lead section.~~FergParkinson

Fixed: Has been fixed byUser:BraedenMayer.FergParkinson

Mila Jam – May need some edits here and there and I am not quite sure what exactly! I know the page is listed as an orphan page, but there are many different articles and publications about this artist.NicoLarsson

The article is presently in a satisfactory state, and it is also not orphaned at this time.North America¹⁰⁰⁰02:30, 30 May 2018 (UTC)

January

~~Duval-Leroy – Reference linkrot issues.~~North America¹⁰⁰⁰05:04, 25 January 2018 (UTC)

Fixed byDerek R Bullamore.North America¹⁰⁰⁰07:09, 28 January 2018 (UTC)

~~Magdalena Zyzak – linkrot issues.~~North America¹⁰⁰⁰12:52, 31 January 2018 (UTC)

I've checked all the links and they all work.Plum3600 (talk)21:42, 13 March 2018 (UTC)

~~Miya's – 30 bare urls~~.North America¹⁰⁰⁰19:58, 16 January 2018 (UTC)

~~Also reads like an advertisement and the sections need extensive cleanup due to trivial nature~~AmericanAir88 (talk)14:46, 21 January 2018 (UTC)
Bare urls were fixed byDerek R Bullamore, and thanks!North America¹⁰⁰⁰08:25, 22 January 2018 (UTC)

DoneAmericanAir88 (talk)03:07, 19 April 2018 (UTC)

~~Can you assist me in cleaning up my draft?~~John Warner Smith (talk)18:51, 27 January 2018 (UTC)

Note: This appears to be aboutDraft:John Warner Smith.North America¹⁰⁰⁰07:04, 28 January 2018 (UTC)

Note thatDraft:John Warner Smith has already been rejected for article status five times due to lack of notability and shortage of reliable sources. Another review now is likely to lead to the same result. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs)22:21, 11 April 2018 (UTC)

The article is now in main namespace, and does not appear to require cleanup at this time.North America¹⁰⁰⁰02:34, 30 May 2018 (UTC)

2017 posts

August

Nortec Software – Written not like an encyclopedia,~~All Bare Urls~~, and is an Orphan.AmericanAir88 (talk)17:48, 18 August 2017 (UTC)

Partly done Bare urls fixed.North America¹⁰⁰⁰00:07, 4 October 2017 (UTC)
Article was soft-deleted perWikipedia:Articles for deletion/Nortec Software.North America¹⁰⁰⁰08:37, 17 October 2017 (UTC)

~~Travancore royal family – Bare urls.~~North America¹⁰⁰⁰04:26, 10 August 2017 (UTC)

Presently has no bare urls.North America¹⁰⁰⁰08:21, 13 October 2017 (UTC)

~~Aron Ra – Tons of external links that should be references.~~Zero Serenity^{(talk –contributions)}18:40, 31 August 2017 (UTC)

Fixed (by another user).North America¹⁰⁰⁰23:58, 3 October 2017 (UTC)

November

~~Acme Monaco – External links inline the article. Reads like a advert and in general the style of this article is confusing, including many IP edits.~~ --Steinfeld-feld (talk)19:59, 24 November 2017 (UTC)

Article has been Deleted from an outside person.AmericanAir88 (talk)

~~Kettlebell Grips – Needs to be entirely rewritten to not look like amanual.~~EMachine03 (talk)00:45, 11 November 2017 (UTC)

Deleted per discussion atWikipedia:Articles for deletion/Kettlebell Grips.North America¹⁰⁰⁰17:52, 23 November 2017 (UTC)

~~Erik K. Alexander – 43 bare urls.~~North America¹⁰⁰⁰18:44, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

Fixed byDerek R Bullamore.North America¹⁰⁰⁰04:27, 19 November 2017 (UTC)

~~Mercuria Energy Group – Many bare urls intermingled in the references.~~North America¹⁰⁰⁰04:22, 14 November 2017 (UTC)

Fixed by other users.North America¹⁰⁰⁰18:12, 20 November 2017 (UTC)

~~Peer Zumbansen – 61 bare urls.~~North America¹⁰⁰⁰04:26, 19 November 2017 (UTC)

Fixed byDerek R Bullamore.North America¹⁰⁰⁰02:23, 22 December 2017 (UTC)

~~Vanjari – Poorly written, no references. Only reference used is from an unreliable website.~~

Nb. The article was redirected (by another user) toBanjara, the latter of which does not appear to need improvements.North America¹⁰⁰⁰03:00, 23 December 2017 (UTC)

~~Chor-Bakr – based on a single source full of errors, see talk page~~ --Bjs (talk)16:22, 28 November 2017 (UTC)

DoneAmericanAir88 (talk)18:12, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

December

~~Roger Smart – Two named references had the same refname and this threw an error. I renamed the both refnames but it's still unclear which reference belongs to which reference call.~~ --Steinfeld-feld (talk)21:10, 17 December 2017 (UTC)

Done