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This is anarchive of past discussions onWikipedia:Cleanup.Do not edit the contents of this page. If you wish to start a new discussion or revive an old one, please do so on thecurrent main page.

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Listings from 2010

2010

December

Taveta, Kenya - This page must be revised: Link does not work any more, Kilimanjaro was not given by the Queen (Mount Kilimanjaro#Name), Tanzania is no longer socialist.Peter in s (talk)06:57, 26 December 2010 (UTC)

November

1985 National League Championship Series - Needs to be heavily revised fortone (for the most demonstrative passages, see the section onGame 4). This is Wikipedia, notESPN. --STUART (talk)07:26, 20 November 2010 (UTC)
Atlantic City Conference is extremely long and wordy. It could also use many citations. --Ultima Designs (talk)14:42, 8 November 2010 (UTC)

October

Dawoodi Bohra Needs clean up with grammar and spelling. -Sherenk1 (talk)06:32, 11 October 2010 (UTC)
El Salvador national football team Needs reliable sources.

September

Eudokia Komnene has confused 2 individuals and is therefore incorrect, on the whole.
Indian Music Industry needs more references and information. --MrFawwaz (talk)12:00, 25 September 2010 (UTC)
Yelahanka has multiple issues : wikification, bad grammar, and poor formatting. Can be considered either for clean-up or deletion. --Cae prince (talk)07:18, 20 September 2010 (UTC)

Reference added –Rice, B. Lewis (2004)."Mysore: a gazetteer compiled for government". Karnataka Gazetteer. pp. 40–48. RetrievedFebruary 24, 2012.Northamerica1000^(talk)12:33, 24 February 2012 (UTC)

August

SLI has two sections which need wikification and the article itself has insufficient in-line references.John Aplessed (talk)
Civics In the table, all types of civic theory need citation except the first two.
Balby Carr Community Sports College.
Hands_(The_Ting_Tings_song) needs work on references.
Fair Spend needs wikification and more references. (talk)

July

Lady Audley's Secret Uses colloquial rather than encyclopedic language.Jackiespeel (talk)18:14, 21 July 2010 (UTC)
George Everest: Article not the right place to remark on the state of disrepair of his former residence (even if something #should# be done about it).Jackiespeel (talk)15:43, 15 July 2010 (UTC)
Art vs Science Needs heavy tone editing, as the person who wrote the article obviously hates the band. *This article has been rewritten. It still needs to be rewritten yet again, but it's a much better sight.*
Gods and Generals (video game) Uses weasel words a bit too much. Also, it desperately needs reliable sources.

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