
Hyphens and dashes are basic to stylish writing in English. Even if your readers aren't quite sure of the precise rules that govern their use, their reading will be easier and their comprehension aided by your systematic use of these punctuation marks. The Manual of Style clearly sets out how to use all three punctuation symbols:hyphens (-),en dashes (–) andem dashes (—). If these three symbols are hard to distinguish visually (- – —), you may need to change your font or browser to a standard one that renders them properly.
If you're unsure how to key in en and em dashes, please seeWikipedia:How to make dashes.
Here, we present texts in which hyphens and/or dashes may be either wrongly used or wrongly absent; in other words, some of the examples are wrong, and some are right. Remember, it's mostly a matter of:
Em dashes are a quite separate beast, and much easier to use. Many writers don't use them at all; they use spaced en dashes – like this – instead of unspaced em dashes—like this—for their "interrupters". It's up to you.
The exercises: unfolding design. Each exercise below will present you with a portion of text in which you can correct the (mis)usage of hyphens and dashes. They are designed to be done in your head, without typing. Each one unfolds in stages that you control: first, the problem text, then a hint to help you along; then a solution; and finally an explanation.
Feedback is welcome on thetalk page. For each exercise, decide on the answer in your mind before clicking on the solution. You may findthis video on hyphens and dashes useful in conjunction with the exercises.
Self-help writing tutorials:
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Lady Featherstone-Morley carelessly ashed her cigarette on the butanol sample. |
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Lady Featherstonorley carelessly ashed her cigarette on the butanol sample.
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The hyphen as given is . |
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| "Featherstone" and "Morley" are joined together here into a compound surname. Replacing the hyphen with a space (Lady Featherstorley) would be wrong by convention. So would an en dash (Lady Featherstorley): there's no opposition or particular relationship between the names here, other than their coming together into someone's compound name. An em dash (Lady Featherstorley) would lookreally awkward. |
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During the period 2005-07, the number of articles on the English Wikipedia quadrupled. |
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During the period , the number of articles on the English Wikipedia quadrupled. |
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The hyphen is . Here, there's a year range, requiring an en dash, which stands for "to": During the period 20,... |
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From 2005–07, house prices in Capetown rose by a third. |
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, house prices in Capetown rose by a third.
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The example is ; this is what you need:
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The case was upheld by the Supreme Court in a 4–3 judgement. |
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What word could be substituted for the symbol? |
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The en dash is . |
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An en dash can stand for "to", "against" or "versus"—these functions are all disjunct (indeed, adversarial) relationships between the items, so a squashy little hyphen (a judgement) would be wrong. It's the same for sports scores: "The Vancouver Canucks massacred the New York Islanders in an 11–2 victory" (not "an 11-2 victory"). |
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By mid-afternoon, the low pressure area had moved east into Ontario. |
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Double adjectives often require hyphenation; and there's another issue. No en dashes this time. |
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By mternoon, the lessure area had moved east into Ontario. |
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The introduction of contrasting red and blue–striped balls transformed the game. |
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Two things wrong: the type of symbol, and the need for it in another place as well. Think of thenominal group (that is, the compound noun): "contrasting red and blue-striped balls". |
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The introduction of contrasting rd blriped balls transformed the game. |
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There were two problems:
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Five classes–comprising more than 100 students–will compete against each other to win a prize for the best Wikipedia collaboration on an article on their chosen suburb of Seattle. |
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Five classmprising more than 100 studenll compete against each other to win a prize for the best Wikipedia article on a suburb of Seattle. |
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The en dashes are required, but their formatting is ; as interruptors, they must be spaced. The alternative is unspaced em dashes, like this: Five classmprising more than 100 studenll compete against each other to win a prize for the best Wikipedia article on a suburb of Seattle. |
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The 16-kilometre (10-mi) distance between the centres has been a major impediment to economic development. |
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There's nothing wrong with the choice of units or the fact of the conversionper se. |
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The example is : there should be no hyphen where a unitabbreviation is used. The 16-kilometre () distance between the centres has been a major impediment to economic development. |
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Sure, both main unit and conversion are used as double adjectives, describing "distance". But the ISO rules, which WP agrees with in this case, are that a hyphenmust be used to connect a value and a fully named unit ("30-kilogram weights"), but mustnot connect a value and an abbreviated unit ("30 kg weights"). Fussy, isn't it. |
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The season was fully-subscribed months before the first game. |
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What is the hyphen trying to do? Is "fully", as an adverb, always going to be clearly and easily connected with a subsequent verb? (Yes.) |
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The hyphen is : "The season was fulbscribed months before the first game." |
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Please memorise:"No hyphen after "-ly". Why? you might ask. Because an "-ly" word, as an adverb, always qualifies a verb (an action), so your readers will already beexpecting it to be joined grammatically to the next word. It's not rocket science. This is one of the most common hyphen glitches on Wikipedia. |
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The Franco–Prussian War (19 July 1870—10 May 1871) resulted in a complete victory for the Prussians and foreshadowed the unification of Germany. |
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Both dashes are wrong; why? |
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The Franussian War (19 July 18 May 1871) resulted in a complete victory for the Prussians and foreshadowed the unification of Germany. |
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At -25°C, it was unseasonably warm in Yellowknife. |
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There are two things wrong. |
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At , it was unseasonably warm in Yellowknife. |
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