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User:Tony1/How to use hyphens and dashes

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    Clearly, they haven't read Wikipedia's Manual of Style.

    Hyphens and dashes are basic to stylish writing in English. Even if your readers aren't quite sure of the precise rules that govern their use, their reading will be easier and their comprehension aided by your systematic use of these punctuation marks. The Manual of Style clearly sets out how to use all three punctuation symbols:hyphens (-),en dashes (–) andem dashes (—). If these three symbols are hard to distinguish visually (- – —), you may need to change your font or browser to a standard one that renders them properly.

    If you're unsure how to key in en and em dashes, please seeWikipedia:How to make dashes.

    Here, we present texts in which hyphens and/or dashes may be either wrongly used or wrongly absent; in other words, some of the examples are wrong, and some are right. Remember, it's mostly a matter of:

    • whether to use a symbol at all;
    • if so, whether to use a hyphen or en dash; and in a few cases
    • whether the symbol should be spaced or unspaced.

    Em dashes are a quite separate beast, and much easier to use. Many writers don't use them at all; they use spaced en dashes – like this – instead of unspaced em dashes—like this—for their "interrupters". It's up to you.

    The exercises: unfolding design. Each exercise below will present you with a portion of text in which you can correct the (mis)usage of hyphens and dashes. They are designed to be done in your head, without typing. Each one unfolds in stages that you control: first, the problem text, then a hint to help you along; then a solution; and finally an explanation.

    Feedback is welcome on thetalk page. For each exercise, decide on the answer in your mind before clicking on the solution. You may findthis video on hyphens and dashes useful in conjunction with the exercises.

    Self-help writing tutorials:

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    Science lab

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     Example

    Lady Featherstone-Morley carelessly ashed her cigarette on the butanol sample.

     Hint

    Lady Featherstonorley carelessly ashed her cigarette on the butanol sample.

    • Does the hyphen indicateconjunction (joining together) ordisjunction (the separateness of both elements)?
     Solution

    The hyphen as given is .

     Explanation
    "Featherstone" and "Morley" are joined together here into a compound surname. Replacing the hyphen with a space (Lady Featherstorley) would be wrong by convention.

    So would an en dash (Lady Featherstorley): there's no opposition or particular relationship between the names here, other than their coming together into someone's compound name.

    An em dash (Lady Featherstorley) would lookreally awkward.

    Nice inflation

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     Example

    During the period 2005-07, the number of articles on the English Wikipedia quadrupled.

     Hint

    During the period , the number of articles on the English Wikipedia quadrupled.

     Solution

    The hyphen is . Here, there's a year range, requiring an en dash, which stands for "to":

    During the period 20,...

     Explanations
    • If the reader is already familiar with what you're saying, you might even drop "the period".
    • Many people prefer just two closing digits, as here, to the full expression ("2005–2007"). MOSNUM says that one and three closing digits are unacceptable.

    Nasty inflation

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     Example

    From 2005–07, house prices in Capetown rose by a third.

     Hint

    , house prices in Capetown rose by a third.

    • There's something inconsistent in the coloured text. Say it aloud.
     Solution

    The example is ; this is what you need:

    , house prices in Capetown rose by a third.
     Explanation
    • The en dash stands for "to", and that's how you'll vocalise it in reading it aloud. We need both prepositions spelled out: "from ... to", not "from ... –", which is awkward.
    • Either that, or recast it:
    .

    Supreme Court

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     Example

    The case was upheld by the Supreme Court in a 4–3 judgement.

     Hint

    What word could be substituted for the symbol?

     Solution

    The en dash is .

     Explanation

    An en dash can stand for "to", "against" or "versus"—these functions are all disjunct (indeed, adversarial) relationships between the items, so a squashy little hyphen (a judgement) would be wrong. It's the same for sports scores: "The Vancouver Canucks massacred the New York Islanders in an 11–2 victory" (not "an 11-2 victory").

    Canadian weather

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     Example

    By mid-afternoon, the low pressure area had moved east into Ontario.

     Hint

    Double adjectives often require hyphenation; and there's another issue. No en dashes this time.

     Solution

    By mternoon, the lessure area had moved east into Ontario.

     Explanations
    • The presence of the first hyphen is , and the absence of a hyphen from the second double adjective is .
    • "Mid-"anything is usually hyphenated by convention, probably because "mid" itself isn't a whole word, yet doesn't jam into the noun nicely the way some prefixes do.
    • "Low-pressure area"—the noun is "area", qualified by a double adjective. There's no such thing as a "pressure area", which could be low or high. Same for "upper-level jet stream"; it's not a "level jet stream" that happens to be the upper one of two.
    • What about "the area of low pressure over the coast"—shouldn't it be "an area of low-pressure"? Nope. There's no double adjective, so no hyphen should be used: here, "low" is an adjective; "pressure" is a noun.

    Coloured balls

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     Example

    The introduction of contrasting red and blue–striped balls transformed the game.

     Hint

    Two things wrong: the type of symbol, and the need for it in another place as well. Think of thenominal group (that is, the compound noun): "contrasting red and blue-striped balls".

     Solution

    The introduction of contrasting rd blriped balls transformed the game.

     Explanation

    There were two problems:

    • Hyphen, not en dash. An en dash was being used to conjoin two adjectives; this job is reserved for hyphens.
    • Hanging hyphen. Not just "blue", but "red" requires a hyphen to link it to the coupled word "striped"; there aretwo double adjectives (qualifying "balls"). Thehanging hyphen added to "red" is useful for making this double compound expression neater. It's a rare case in which a hyphen is followed by a space. SeeMoS.

    Wikipedia Prize

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     Example

    Five classes–comprising more than 100 students–will compete against each other to win a prize for the best Wikipedia collaboration on an article on their chosen suburb of Seattle.

     Hints
    • Five classmprising more than 100 studenll compete against each other to win a prize for the best Wikipedia article on a suburb of Seattle.
    • These en dashes are "interrupters", like very strong commas; they usually occur in pairs to mark off explanatory text.
     Solution

    Five classmprising more than 100 studenll compete against each other to win a prize for the best Wikipedia article on a suburb of Seattle.

     Explanation

    The en dashes are required, but their formatting is ; as interruptors, they must be spaced. The alternative is unspaced em dashes, like this:

    Five classmprising more than 100 studenll compete against each other to win a prize for the best Wikipedia article on a suburb of Seattle.

    Distance

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     Example

    The 16-kilometre (10-mi) distance between the centres has been a major impediment to economic development.

     Hint

    There's nothing wrong with the choice of units or the fact of the conversionper se.

     Solution

    The example is : there should be no hyphen where a unitabbreviation is used.

    The 16-kilometre () distance between the centres has been a major impediment to economic development.

     Explanation

    Sure, both main unit and conversion are used as double adjectives, describing "distance". But the ISO rules, which WP agrees with in this case, are that a hyphenmust be used to connect a value and a fully named unit ("30-kilogram weights"), but mustnot connect a value and an abbreviated unit ("30 kg weights"). Fussy, isn't it.

    Seats at the game

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     Example

    The season was fully-subscribed months before the first game.

     Hint

    What is the hyphen trying to do? Is "fully", as an adverb, always going to be clearly and easily connected with a subsequent verb? (Yes.)

     Solution

    The hyphen is : "The season was fulbscribed months before the first game."

     Explanation

    Please memorise:"No hyphen after "-ly".

    Why? you might ask. Because an "-ly" word, as an adverb, always qualifies a verb (an action), so your readers will already beexpecting it to be joined grammatically to the next word. It's not rocket science. This is one of the most common hyphen glitches on Wikipedia.

    Killing fields

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     The example

    The Franco–Prussian War (19 July 1870—10 May 1871) resulted in a complete victory for the Prussians and foreshadowed the unification of Germany.

     Hint

    Both dashes are wrong; why?

     The answer

    The Franussian War (19 July 18 May 1871) resulted in a complete victory for the Prussians and foreshadowed the unification of Germany.

     Explanation
    • Word particle. A hyphen should be used in favour of an en dash between two items if one item (or both) is just a wordparticle; "Franco-" is such a particle – a mere prefix – whereas "French" would be the full-word equivalent ("the French–Prussian War", with an en dash; but by convention this is not the expression). Same for "Sino-Russian War", as opposed to "Chinese–Russian trade agreement". An acronym or abbreviation in this context would count as a full word ("the recent UK–Iceland spat over financial matters").
    • Range. The em dash in the date was wrong: ranges require anen dash, and if either item has an internal space, as in both dates here, the en dash must also be spaced, on both sides. Many editors use a non-breaking space on the left side of the en dash when it's spaced ("...July 1870&nbsp;– 10 May ...").

    Hot town

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     The example

    At -25°C, it was unseasonably warm in Yellowknife.

     Hint

    There are two things wrong.

     Solution

    At , it was unseasonably warm in Yellowknife.

     Explanation
    • Minus sign. First, you may think this is an en dash, but it's aminus sign, which mathematicians are fussy about. Until early 2008, MOS used to allow en dashes for negative signs (−3.5) and subtraction operators (4 − 1 = 3); not any more. A minus sign isvery subtly different from an en dash—something to do with lying higher on the line. Squint and ... you won't see it. Here they are: hyphen, , the en dash, and the em dash: - – — . As a superior race, these mathematicians have the run of the place. Hmmmph.
    • Value–unit space. Second, MOS insists on a space between all values (−25) and units (°C), with two minor exceptions (angular degrees and geographical coordinates); so it's−25 °C, not−25°C. There's no space between the minus sign and the value (never− 25)
    • Keying it in. Take a look at how you should key it in: "At , it was unseasonably warm in Yellowknife."
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