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Nominator:Volcanoguy (talk ·contribs)16:58, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Reviewer:Crisco 1492 (talk·contribs)15:10, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I'll take this review. Please note that I may bring up subjects that are not specifically GA criteria. I will identify these explicitly when mentioning them, and they will not affect a pass or fail decision. These are intended to help you further refine the article, perhaps with the goal of taking it to FAC. — Chris Woodrich (talk)15:10, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- The cone is almost completely surrounded by glacial ice of Mount Edziza'sice cap - "the glacial ice", maybe?
- alkali basaltpillow lavas,tuffbreccias andlapilli - This goes againstWP:SEAOFBLUE
- WP:SEAOFBLUE claimswhen possible, do not place links next to each other, to avoid appearing like a single link; it's not always possible to avoid two links placed next to each other.Volcanoguy16:05, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- The name of thevolcanic cone was adopted 2 January 1980 on theNational Topographic System map 104G/10 - "Adopted on", maybe?
- I'm not sure, the source claims "Adopted 2 January 1980 on 194G, as submitted by Geological Survey of Canada."Volcanoguy15:51, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Cassiar Land District of northwesternBritish Columbia, Canada, - "theCassiar Land District of northwesternBritish Columbia, Canada," perhaps (applies to both)
- I don't think so.Volcanoguy16:06, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Its northern, eastern and southern flanks are mantled by the roughly 70-square-kilometre (27-square-mile)Mount Edzizaice cap and rises about 150 metres (490 feet) - Your subject was "flanks", so "rise" would be the correct verb.
- Done.Volcanoguy15:48, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- beddedtuffbreccia - Sea of blue again
- See above.Volcanoguy16:05, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Pleistocenetristanite,trachyte - More sea of blue
- See above.Volcanoguy16:05, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- 2a - Supported
- 2d - Supported
- 2h - Supported
- 26 - Supported
- 51 - Supported
- Earwig shows no issues.
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