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Adapted from 1911 enc.— Precedingunsigned comment added bySodium (talk •contribs)03:22, 13 March 2002 (UTC)[reply]
What is a sonata? I could not answer this question after reading the article for 2 minutes. The intro paragraph starts in about 'Chapter 4' of sonatas.173.167.180.11 (talk)18:34, 29 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Filled outcello sonata, createdviolin sonata andviola sonata - stubs with brief history and lists, both could use at least some thoughts about the balance problems caused by the most common combination (that is, with piano, especially the cello/piano case) and a more detailed examination of the history of the violin sonata from the violin solo --> violin/continuo --> piano with violin added later --> true duo (more, or, less) than I actually gave. With Mozart partially responsible... So, questions - do these articles belong at all; anyone who plays these string instruments care to think about balance questions; should a sonata-type category be created in which these can be subsumed;string duo to give a home to the Ravel, Martinu, the great Kodaly, Mozart K423/424 (and FJ Haydn's 6 and JM Haydn's 2, andtheir predecessors, for it had a history too as much as sonatas,) ... ... et caet...Schissel 13:43, 17 Nov 2004 (UTC)
Stirling has made sweeping changes to the article. I am quite concerned about some of these, especially those affecting the section "The sonata in the Classical era". While there is a little good and accurate new information, some of it has more to do withsonata form than with the larger structure of several movements that the article is supposed to be about, though this is not made clear. And a good deal of useful information (about the sequence of movements in the Classical sonata) presented nowhere else in Wikipedia is summarily obliterated. Moreover, Stirling has introduced careless errors that will need fixing by some poor navvy.
Specific points:
TheClassical era took the sonata structures it found in the Baroque, and began to concentrate on both simplifying the number of harmonic transitions possible between sections of the work, and at the same time, increasing the complexity and length of each section, and creating a much greater wealth of transitional methods at a composer's disposal.
On a natural reading of this, it concerns evolution of the sonataform (and relations among its varioussections). As such it is about the internal structure of one kind of movement. But this is not signalled, so the newcomer is likely to be confused. Surely this material belongs in the articleSonata form. There are also expository infelicities and aberrant punctuation here.
Theorists of this time begin writing on the standard patterns of first movements, which would later form the basis for the defintion [sic] ofSonata form. At this time the sonata undergoes a change in usage, from being a term for applied [sic] to many different kinds of small instrumental work, to being more specifically applied to chamber music genres with either a solo instrument, or a solo instrument with the piano.
Note first the shift in tense, from "took" and "began", above, to "begin" and "undergoes", here. The wording of the first sentence is indirect and inelegant. There is a confusion in the second sentence between sonata and theterm "sonata", along with other awkwardnesses.
Mozart and Clementi, and then Beethoven and Schubert, would establish thepiano sonata as a fundamental genre of piano music for playing in solo concerts, and as the standard reference against which other works were measured. In contrast, at the time theTheme and variations was the most remarked upon and covered genre of piano music, particularly because of its use inimprovisation.
A new shift in tense, with "would establish". The last sentence is wayward and oddly elusive. Whatexactly does "covered" mean in "most remarked upon and covered genre"?
The classical [sic] sonata for instrument was usually in three, not four movements, a form later described as the "concerto-sonata form" by some authors.
("Classical" should be capped, as it was consistently in this section before the edit, in conformity with established style in the music articles.) While many Classical sonatas had just three movements, it is perhaps misleading to say that they "usually" had three rather than four. Contemporary writers, according to New Grove, didn't see it that way. And for expository purposes it is perhaps best to present a four-movement standard, which enables the three-movement variants to be more lucidly explained. But of course, all of that is now dropped.
In sum, I find the edit, especially for the now much smaller section on the Classical sonata, most retrograde. Such a pity that we can't preserve what is good here! And I say nothing about the deficiencies in material in other sections of the article.
I'd revert things, but I don't want to get into an interminable struggle. I am not optimistic, if careful and valuable work (which I admit I had a hand in, here) is simply disregarded. I leave it to others to work out how to deal with this. --Noetica 22:14, 19 Feb 2005 (UTC)
That's like "so sue me!", right? Well, if you are not ready to enter into dialogue beyond that, confronted with my own diligent and extended analysis, RFC or some other move may well be called for. For the moment I'll just wait to see what happens. --Noetica 23:08, 19 Feb 2005 (UTC)
Some rationales for the edit I just did:
1) I think much of the material about which Noetica is complaining is redundant with existing material insonata form or even insonata itself; so I removed it and added cross references where appropriate.
2) I agree emphatically with Noetica that an article about sonatas should give the basics--it's a corollary of the principle that we serve our readers, not ourselves. Here, the basics would include the typical musical forms of sonata movements and what keys they are in. I've restored this material in edited form (I changed Noetica's very short sections to bulleted items, hoping this will be a bit less distracting.)
3) I removed this paragraph:
because my past reading leads me to believe it is erroneous. The piano sonata was house music in Classical times, and became a vehicle for concert performance only during the Romantic era, with the so-called "invention of the piano recital" by Liszt.
4) For future editing, I think it would be helpful to put in more examples--I think it's a bit dull to give general claims about a musical form without citing actual instances. I put in a couple, but more are needed.
Opus33 17:25, 20 Feb 2005 (UTC)
Since the two of you are incapable of good manners, good faith or counting I shall lay this out bluntly: you are not only wrong, but pushing a POV which is factually inaccurate. I have before me the complete sonatas of Haydn for piano. How many are in four movements? How many are in your supposedly standard lay out? Exactly none. I have before the the complete sonatas of mozart. How many are in four movements? Anyone? I have before me the compete piano sonatas of Beethoven - again - how many are in your asserted standard form versus three movements.
The evidence - the overwhelming and obvious evidence - is that in the classical era the word "sonata" was applied to solo instrumental works, or works with one instrument plus keyboard. There is no reference in that period to the description of a four movement work as the basic "sonata" from which others are omitted. Both of you are confusing a later POV with - namely that of the Romantic era - with the classical practice.
I dispute this assertion of Stirling's concerning Opus33 and myself: "the two of you are incapable of good manners, good faith or counting." It is offensive and uncalled for. Without giving any of the obvious replies that spring to mind, I shall restrain my exuberance. I may well take action about it in the appropriate place, along with action about what Opus33 and I seem to agree is Stirling's substandard and disruptive editing of this article.
Stirling is right that the three-movement form was well represented in the Classical, but I have explained why it may be a good idea to take the four-movement form as a norm for expository purposes. I did not do my best work when I wrote "the sonata took on a fairly well-defined standard form (well exemplified in the work of Joseph Haydn)" without further elaboration. Stirling is right that few of Haydn's keyboard sonatas have four movements; he is factually wrong that "exactly none" have four movements, since both HobXVI:6 and HobXVII:8 do (so I believe, but I have not my copy of the score to hand, where I am). Stirling is way off the mark concerning Mozart. I wrote explicitly "many Classical sonatas (notably Mozart's) had fewer movements", so I had already clearly allowed for Mozart.
Stirling writes concerning Beethoven: "I have before me the compete piano sonatas of Beethoven - again - how many are in your asserted standard form versus three movements." My answer (again, without having my scores to hand): Well, at leastsix appear to fit the "standard form" precisely (Op. 2 Nos. 1,2,3; Op. 7; Op. 22; Op. 28). Note the preponderance of his earlier more "Classical" sonatas here. Several others show only one of the alterations from the standard that I had given as possibilities, and in the analysis of just about all of his piano sonatas the standard is a useful guide.
Stirling writes: "There is no reference in that period to the description of a four movement work as the basic "sonata" from which others are omitted." But even if that were true, it is not relevant, as has been pointed out repeatedly. He continues: "Both of you are confusing a later POV with - namely that of the Romantic era - with the classical practice." I dispute this. As I have just demonstrated, in presenting whatbelongs here (and nowhere else) about the overall structure of the Classical sonata, Opus33, some others, and myself have used an excellent device for exhibiting crucial facts. Stirling has sought to expunge all of this. As I have shown in detail, he has done this with little care in his writing (see my section above, and also atClassical music era and atHaydn). Much of the material he put in its place is irrelevant (at best) to the theme of the article.
Opus33, thanks for your useful work on this, supplementing my own supplementing of others' good work. I shall not yet do any reverting or other editing, but wait for any interested others to take action (like reverting to your last version, fixing just a couple of minor things perhaps). I agree that examples would help, and had thought to do some of that, though I see you have already made a good start. We must try to suffer the recent interruption gladly, I suppose. --Noetica 21:48, 20 Feb 2005 (UTC)
Then RFC me for it. From my perspective both of you have violated good faith and good research practice by dropping uncited POV on this page. I don't have anything further to say until such time as there is an RFC and it comes to documenting sources.Stirling Newberry 22:35, 20 Feb 2005 (UTC)
Stirling, what's to document, beyond giving examples and doing what we've already done? Opus33 has started giving examples in the Classical sonata section; I have given examples above, flatly refuting what you had asserted; and now you have (contradicting yourself!) given examples that supportmy salient points as I state them above, in your edits of the section. Why are you not concerned to retract some of these factually erroneous objections to points of mine that you now endorse in the article itself?
What the section needs is aclearly presented,accurate, andinformative exposition for the user. I see that your latest edits take back some of your earlier lapses; but really, you have not succeeded in meeting the three desiderata just given. If you are, perhaps, displeased that someone other thanyou has done a good job, please nevertheless think twice before seeking to ensure thatyour words (often obscure, often substandard English) are what the reader must endure. Unlike you (apparently), I wish to respect the courtesies and protocols of Wikipedia. I shall try for restraint, despite your provocation here and elsewhere. --Noetica 22:56, 20 Feb 2005 (UTC)
This page needs some sources. You allcouldn't be havingthis argument if you all just brought out some sources.
Are we talking about two different things (ie, classical sonata vs romantic sonata)? Are we talking about one thing? Are we talking about the one thing "itself" (essentially) or generalizations of that thing.Hyacinth 23:05, 20 Feb 2005 (UTC)
I can't think of examples ofanythings which actually live up to their standards or customary forms.Hyacinth 03:32, 21 Feb 2005 (UTC)
I thank you all for not biting my fingers for treading on this conversation (or for mixing that metaphor), from my experience all editors involved are nice qualtity contributors to Wikipedia. I think you all can work it out. My opinion on the article currently is that stating the existance of a "standard" or "customary" form requires citations. Otherwise it isoriginal research andunverifiable, please see the policies at those links. To summarize:
<sorry for delay in replying; Opus33 only edits on Sundays>
Stirling Newberry is correct that most Classical sonatas have fewer than four movements. In my earlier edit, I was entirely focused on fixing other problems with this article (see my comments above) and I missed this point. Mea culpa.
Stirling Newberry also asserted that I was being rude. To be honest, I just can't see this; I don't think my remarks were insulting in any way, nor were they intended to be. Indeed, I made them as a courtesy, to justify a revert.
It can be further noted that I didn't accuse anybody of being unable to count, nor did I defy anyone to "RFC" me.[1] Stirling Newberry did both, and I think it would be appropriate for him to apologize for doing so.
Concerning issues of courtesy in general, I greatly recommend for their wisdom the Wikipedia guidesWikipedia:Staying cool when the editing gets hot andWikipedia:Assume good faith, which I hope Stirling Newberry will consult.
Lastly, since my edit seems to have been interpreted by Stirling Newberry as based on malice, I would like to assert what I take to be the principles of good encyclopedia editing that underlay it.
We can disagree on whether the edit by Stirling Newberry that I mostly reverted lived up to these surely uncontroversial values. My judgment was that it largely did not, and that is why I edited it.
The dozens of edits made by Stirling Newberry during the past week seem to have improved things somewhat, though I do believe that further editing would still be beneficial.
Thanks for listening,Opus33 06:23, 28 Feb 2005 (UTC)
^ Note for non-cognoscenti: "RFC" means "Request for comment". The start-up of a "Request for comment" page is the beginning (evidence-gathering) of the process whereby an editor can lose his Wikipedia editing privileges. Thus, "RFC me" is the Wikipedia equivalent of the traditional taunt "So sue me."
I am going to just ignore this, as the crisis has passed and I have no wish to open wounds which are healing. Particularly since the article has been improved as a result.Stirling Newberry
Opus33, yours is a very measured and responsible contribution here, in my opinion. Like you, I have not so far edited any of the copious material that Stirling has added. Much of it addresses things that we would want addressed, of course; but it needs substantial editing. For myself, I will not waste my time on material that is largely in the wrong location, that is not well structured or lucid, and that will in all likelihood be subject to further edits removing any ameliorations. In short, I shall not be editing this article at all. The offences committed here amount to a mere unavoidable irritant, when one takes the long view. There are better things to be concerned with. --Noetica 21:24, 28 Feb 2005 (UTC)
Famous is necessarily a subjective criterion. My method so far has been to run through google on various periods and pick up the sonatas listed, plus emailing with various critics I know. If someone feels a sonata listed is marginal and should be removed, by all means do so. And there are certainly sonatas which belong on the list which are not there yet. This, of all things, is something where progressive consensus should be able to reach a better list than any one editor.Stirling Newberry 01:31, 1 Mar 2005 (UTC)
I've moved Beethoven's Sonatas to "Romantic" and removed the first. Some more thinning of this list could be in order, and various composers (and a whole period!) need to be added (like Haydn). If anyone believes that Beethoven's Sonatas should be listed as "Classical", then perhaps Beethoven's section should be split?
i need to translate an article for the italian wikipedia, about the sonata.
i know it's ignominous, but we still miss this entry.....
i'm sorry for me beeing so ignorant, but since i foundthis andthat, which one is the best for me to translate?
thanking you all in advance
--joana15:30, 24 May 2005 (UTC)[reply]
...that the title of the 2nd paragraph ("forces") could be considered as "forms"??
in this case, everything would be more understandable....
thanks --joana 17:49, 8 Jun 2005 (UTC)
I'm just wondering if there's a reason why the list of famous sonatas is not in alphabetical order?Karol 20:29, July 18, 2005 (UTC)
I tried to keep them roughly chronological. But am agnostic on how they are to be ordered in the final version. Great additions Eric.Stirling Newberry20:14, 22 July 2005 (UTC)[reply]
When one searches for "Sonata", one arrives atSonata, a disambig page. I think that the article about the musical Sonata should come up directly, as it is the predominant meaning (not the car or the sedative, which are deduced from the musical term). Is it ok with everybody if I move the disambig page toSonata (disambiguation) and move this page toSonata?Peter S.02:06, 21 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Thesonata form article has a contrast at the begining of the article. Should a similar contrast be here. --Gbleem23:39, 19 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
It wasrequested that this article be renamed but the procedure outlined atWP:RM#How to request a page move did not appear to be followed, and consensus could not be determined. Please request a move again with proper procedure if there is still a desire for the page to be moved. Thank you for time! --tariqabjotu02:54, 25 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Sonata (music) →Sonata – There doesn't seem to be a reason for the "(music)" in the title. There is already aSonata (disambiguation) page. The only other pages with the word "Sonata" in them areHyundai Sonata andSonata Form. There is noSonata (car) orSonata (musical form). Both of these terms derive their name from the musical term term "Sonata". Therefore, it should be its own page, without the "music" in brackets. I tried moving the page myself, but it won't let me:The page could not be moved: a page of that name already exists, or the name you have chosen is not valid. Please choose another name, or use Requested moves to ask an administrator to help you with the move.Sonata already re-directs toSonata (music), so this could be the reason why I'm getting the error - it does have 3 previous edits (it used to be a disambig page untilSonata (disambiguation) was created).User:Peter S. requested the move 8 months ago, and there has not been a single objection.Crabbyass19:12, 25 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Add "* Support" or "* Oppose" followed by an optional one-sentence explanation, then sign your opinion with ~~~~
Add any additional comments --Crabbyass19:12, 25 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Beethoven belongs with the Vienna Classicists here, and I have moved him back to the Classical era. Added Haydn, Dussek and Clementi, but by no means exhaustive in any of the three.Stirling Newberry01:05, 3 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]
It is time to lower the temperature on this page.
It is bad form to mix a content dispute with copy edits, and then argue the copy edits as a way of winning the content dispute.
There are violations of citability on the page that must be cleared up. The bach sonata reference is the most obvious "can be admitted" is clearly a judgement call, and if no one can say who made it, or what body of opinion holds it, then it has to go. I've been leaving it in hoping that who ever inserted it would put in the reference - but if not, then it is uncitable POV and not broad consensus.
The specific issues need to be discussed, not edit warred over.
[The post above was by Stirling Newberry –Noetica00:45, 4 September 2006 (UTC)] 17:13, 3 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Stirling Newberry17:54, 3 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I replaced "Forces" with "Instrumentation", and made a couple of minor changes to that section, including replacing "cf" with "compare". Does that really look like it has the right meaning? What are we comparing Schubert's Wanderer Fantasy to? I also replaced "not quite felt to be sonatas" with a more accurate description of what a Fantasy is. -Rainwarrior19:19, 3 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]
The Wander Fantasia is almost universally not listed as a sonata, and thus is cited as an example of where the lines are drawn.Stirling Newberry16:40, 5 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]
One of the most monumental sets of sonatas of the late 20th century comes fromOlivier Greif. Do people think he is important enough to include? I am inclined to say "no" simply because of the scarcity of recordings and performances. But he at least deserves a better article.Stirling Newberry16:43, 5 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I have at present removed this from the page:
JW Davison wrote in his The Works of Fredrick Chopin, on page 7 (1843):
I said before that it is entered without introduction, and its significance is dreadfully unclear. If it has a place in the article, it must have proper commentary explaining its meaning (if it has one) and relevance to the sonata. I am not opposed to it being put back as long as it is given some context. -Rainwarrior19:38, 5 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I note the bad faith edit ganging and personal attacks. Since the best way of dealing with these matters is to avoid them I will not edit this page in the main. I am protesting the bad faith and personal attacks, but am not in any mood to engage in an edit war unless there is some substansive issue (such as the number of movments in a Haydn sonata) at issue. You win, but under protest.
Good day.
Stirling Newberry01:48, 6 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I am not a music expert by profession, but I thought Liszt wrote only one sonata, perhaps the most played piano sonata of them all, in B minor? (the article implies more than one: "(..)those of Franz Liszt, (...)" --Pim Bussink00:34, 11 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I typed "sonatina" into the search box and was redirected tosonata. Which would be fine, except that the sonata article doesn't mention sonatinas at all. Should it? Or is the redirect from sonatina inappropriate?Telsa(talk)12:41, 1 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]
I have created a re-direct page to, ‘Piano Sonata No. 17 (Beethoven)’, so that the link to the article on Beethoven’s, ‘Tempest,’ sonata is no longer red. (Red links annoy me!)♫ The Grand Harp ♫ (talk)19:47, 24 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Does anyone feel like splitting the article based on the sonata's time period? I find myself linking toSonata#The_sonata_in_the_Classical_period often, because I mean to compare to the Classical, Beethoven-esque Sonata only, not the sprawling post-Romantic or Contemporary sonatas.ALTON.ıl08:22, 12 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I've read this article twice and then started reading the Sonata form article and I still couldn't explain to someone exactly what a sonata is. This article is very passive and painful to read. The early portions of the article focus on the word sonata and not on the music. The latter portions focus on what academics think of the word sonata and again neglect the music. The entire introductory section relates only to the word (using means, term, designating, word, applied). Only once is there any reference to the sonata itself, but even that is passive, being only a vague classification, alongside the fugue. It isn't even the primary point of the sentence that it's in.
If this doesn't make sense, substitute something like a car or a piano for sonata and re-read the article.
By the way, can someone decide if the 'Classical' era is an Era, era, or period?
For what it's worth, the article on fugue has similar issues. The one on concerto however, has some clarity. It would be nice if someone who was reasonably knowledgeable on the subject would write an article, or even a section within, describing what a sonata is, perhaps even the reasons why a composer would call their composition one. Thanks.—Precedingunsigned comment added by99.242.7.241 (talk)02:29, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Let me try to clarify the various uses of "sonata" that the articles "sonata" and "sonata form" seem to try to address. (1) From the the 15th century until about 1750, "sonata" was a generic term denoting an instrumental composition, though by the 18th century it usually denoted a multi-movement composition for one or two melody instruments and continuo. (2) From about 1750 onwards, "sonata" denoted a large scale composition, usually in "sonata form" in sense 3 below, and usually for piano solo or for one instrument plus piano. (Notable exceptions are the Ravel Sonata for Violin and Cello and the Bartok Sonata for Two Pianos and Percussion.) (3) "Sonata form" can refer to the multi-movement form used not only by sonatas but also by symphonies; trios, quartets, and quintets; and (with some modification) concertos from about 1750 onwards. By roughly the 1780s symphonies and trios/quartets/quintets were typically four movements, while many sonatas (sense 2) continued to have 2 or 3 movements well into the 19th century. Concertos have with very few exceptions remained at 3 movements. (4) "Sonata form" also refers specifically to the form typically used for the first movements of works in sonata form (sense 3), as well as many operatic arias of the Classical period.
Right now, the "sonata" article tries to cover (1), (2), and (3), while the "sonata form" article tries to cover (4). I'm wondering if a reorganization so that "sonata" covers (1) and (2) while "sonata form" (or possibly 2 "sonata form" articles) cover (3) and (4) might help. This is not uncontroversial; my impression (it has been a while, and I'm not even sure I could find citations) is that some scholars use "sonata form" to cover only (4), with no word for (3), while other scholars use "sonata form" for (3) and "sonata-allegro form" for (4), and others use "sonata form" for both.Quasihumanist (talk)00:33, 21 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]