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This article failed good article nomination. This is how the article, as of February 4, 2007, compares against thesix good article criteria:
1. Well written?: Lead is too short and does not summarise the article (see criteria 1b)
Needs more wikilinking to explain words likecallosities (see criteria 1d)
Sentences, particularly in thePhysical description section are short and choppy - the second paragraph is unclear at first reading as it is mostly a sequence of comparative sentences.
2. Factually accurate?: Lack of inline citations - while not mandatory the lack of a direct reference for statements likeleast studied of all cetaceans, theWhaling and whale-watching section etc.. is an issue. Statements that are likely to be challenged need unambiguous citations. (see criteria 2b )
3. Broad in coverage?: Does not seem to be broad enough
listed as low risk but I can't see anything on population estimates
Needs a section on taxonomy and evolution
Needs details on additional aspects such as swimming speed, them being unusual in having 17 pairs of ribs, differences in this whales baleen as compared to other baleen whales(lists visual differences but I'm sure that there are structural as well).
4. Neutral point of view?: good
5. Article stability? good
6. Images?: needs images – if only pictures of skeletons from museums
Should not be an "Non Available" or "Uknown" option then? Presenting such a rare animal as "Least Concerned" is quite risky, even to its conservation efforts, especially if we take account that wikipedia can have effect on public opinion.
"The species lives in the Southern Hemisphere and is believed to be circumpolar, living in a band from about 30°S to 50°S in areas with :surface water temperature between 5 and 20 degrees Celsius (21 and 68 degree Fahrenheit)"
...the temperature conversions are wrong. 5° C = 41° F. I bet the Celsius is the right temperature (21 degrees F = -6 degrees C), but since I don't know the source of the information, I'm going to leave it for someone who can confirm it.128.163.7.129 (talk)02:20, 18 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Cabrera et al (2005) says a speciman of pygmy right reportedly caught off Tierra del Fuego was actually a minke whale. Was there another pygmy right that stranded there (sources are vague)? Or was the above speciman the only example of this species there? It would change the range of the species several degrees of latitude if it had been the only speciman. Guess I'll have to look into more.OldBabyBlue (talk)03:50, 15 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
They also mention a speciman from a private collection in Tierra del Fuego, on the Argentine side, but don't say where exactly it came from (presumably it stranded there?).OldBabyBlue (talk)03:54, 15 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
The population distribution section states the species is "circumpolar" and lives in a band between 30 and 55 degrees South latitude. As theAntarctic Circle is at approx 66 degrees, the 30 to 55 range would be entirely north of the circle. Thus, I can't see how the Pygmy Right's range could be described as circumpolar. Unfortunately, I don't have access to the referenced source to check it out, so I didn't change the text of the article. I did tag the wikilink tocircumpolar as needing disambiguation. That's actually what led me here in the first place and, as none of the links on that disambiguation page appear to fit here, and since it doesn't actually seem to fit the definition of circumpolar, I suspect we just need a rewording. --LarryJeff (talk)20:04, 19 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I've reverted you. Take a look at the range map in the article. That shows the range accurately. Also, the source is the IUCN redlist, and it is 100% online and free. If you click the link in the reference list, then on the map at the redlist, you'll see if matches the range map in the article. Then grab a map or a globe that shows latitude lines and you'll see the range is indeed in the 30-55 degree range, and that it circles the pole. -UtherSRG(talk)04:23, 20 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Ah... I see your issue now.... the dab page doesn't include the definition of circumpolar that is implied here.Subantarctic seems to fit best, eh? Note the articles doesn't claim fully circumpolar, but that it may be circumpolar. Shall we dab this link to subantarctic? (I was thinking you had a problem with the range itself... but the ranged definitely "circles the pole".) -UtherSRG(talk)14:46, 20 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I guess Subantarctic is probably the best fit. I looked at that yesterday, and decided against it since that article defines subantarctic as 46 to 60 deg, so the pygmy right's range still extends farther north. Maybe instead of linking to another article, link to the Wiktionary entry for circumpolar? --LarryJeff (talk)15:02, 20 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
There's a claim in the article now that this should be in Cetotheriidae; see:Fordyce, R. E.; Marx, F. G. (2012). "The pygmy right whale Caperea marginata: The last of the cetotheres".Proceedings of the Royal Society B: Biological Sciences.280 (1753): 20122645.doi:10.1098/rspb.2012.2645.{{cite journal}}: CS1 maint: article number as page number (link). Should we update the taxobox? Discuss.ErikHaugen(talk |contribs)05:42, 23 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Appears someone changed it without discussion. I would wait for other papers to support it, and perhaps for it to regularly appear in secondary sources (which might be a little too long to wait).SHFW70 (talk)22:54, 23 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
There is a new paper (below) that challenges the assignment to Cetotheriidae. Most recent does not equal most right, but I think there is often too much of a rush to change classifications on Wikipedia whenever a new phylogeny is published, without giving adequate discussion. A good article would not make arbitrary classifications based on the phylogenydu jour, but rather adequately discuss the controversy and conflicting evidence, perWP:DUE--Animalparty-- (talk)21:41, 13 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Bisconti, Michelangelo (2014). "Anatomy of a new cetotheriid genus and species from the Miocene of Herentals, Belgium, and the phylogenetic and palaeobiogeographical relationships of Cetotheriidae s.s. (Mammalia, Cetacea, Mysticeti)".Journal of Systematic Palaeontology:1–19.doi:10.1080/14772019.2014.890136.
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