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"In particular, cost-benefit analyses will reveal that, for many households, Piedmont schools make more economic sense than private schooling." This sounds like it was written by a creative Piedmont real estate agent. Bias? Citation? The whole paragraph is very un-encyclopedic.—Precedingunsigned comment added by24.18.218.216 (talk)07:19, 6 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]
This can be largely attributed to the dedicated population of parents who have resources to pay higher prices for housing so that their children can attend Piedmont schools instead of private schools.Is this sentence suggesting personal dedication on the part of Piedmont's parents, or just saying that their money is legally dedicated to the school district? If it's the former, the word "dedicated" should be struck; if the latter, the sentence needs rephrasing.
I find this section pretty offensive and poorly conceived/poorly written overall. Seems like the facts are: parcel tax, additional resources for public schools beyond neighbors' funding streams, excellent scores, many private school options nearby as well. But I find the overtly commercial and un-informative link to a realtor's website as reference #1 to be even more offensive. I thought Wikipedia was supposed to be non-commercial? A Piedmont resident and first-time commentor24.23.130.3705:26, 24 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Edit war over:It is an extremely liberal city known for its disapproval of conservatism. A liberal majority runs the city proudly and partisanly, receiving much criticism from residents. As noted with similar edits onTalk:Piedmont High School (California) this controversial statement needs verification from reliable sources as to the elements:
Noted sample google news archive edits at the Piedmont High talk page.Zedla (talk)20:55, 20 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]
What was noted in the article was:
"Author Jack London lived in Piedmont, and Kennedy's Secretary of Defense Robert S. McNamara grew up in Piedmont, where his family lived on Ranleigh Way."
After checking the 1930 census and various Alameda County voter registrations through 1940, the McNamara's lived on Annerley Road, not on Ranleigh.
Highlandclan (talk)05:11, 28 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Your most recent edit to the page went something like this:
It is an extremely liberal city known for its disapproval of conservatism. A liberal majority runs the city proudly and partisanly, receiving much criticism from residents.
I, as the reader, have no idea whether this is a true statement. So, I want to check it. OH NOES! There is no citation or reference. What you need is to reference the relevant political parties in the city and their majorities for the first statement. That will not be too hard: it is a fact, and usually voting in Liberals implies a dislike of Conservatives. Alternatively just run an online questionairre (a little bit dubious). For the second statement, if you are adamant it should go in get an impartial friend to go out and questionairre people on the street: there is no other fair way of doing it. It is inconvenient, but nothing else can be done. I realise my answer doesn't help much, but it is the most factual way of going about this.Elemesh (talk)10:49, 27 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
HiHi, your answer actually helps a lot. One question: Would it be acceptable to say "It is a city known for its disapproval of conservatism."? Grammatically, that is correct as long as one person knows it for that. Since I know it for its disapproval, that phrase would be correct, even it it did not disapprove of conservatism. For part two, would it be okay to say "receiving criticism from residents" since I personally know residents who criticize it for that reason, that would be true. How could I cite that? If I follow your directions and we agree and I post it up there, would there be any way to guarantee it doesn't get deleted. I am willing to put work into this, if you are willing to help. :) READY?! (That is not shouting; it's excited!)76.102.193.102 (talk)10:58, 27 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
This isn't really a matter of grammar. The first statement is fine, as long as you refer to the fact that the ruling council of the city (or whatever it happens to be) are primarily Liberals. Saying it receives criticism from some residents as long as you hav some assurance it is not original research - how you would get this is up to you. If you do all of that, I think the outcome is good enough to stay there until the city is no longer Liberal.Elemesh (talk)11:11, 27 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I am going to change it now; I don't mean to do any vandalism. Feel free to delete or fix my edit if it is not what you meant. I mean no wrong. Ready?—Precedingunsigned comment added by76.102.193.102 (talk)11:13, 27 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you Elemesh, if you approve this, is there any way to "lock" this article so people do not delete those two sentences every day? Or can you make that edit irreversible? If you don't approve it, that's fine; please clarify what I did not comprehend. Thanks.76.102.193.102 (talk)11:22, 27 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I have changed it slightly. I am still not content with it though - it needs sources badly. See what you can come up with, but I cannot guarantee that in the mean-time an editor will not come storming in and decimate it.Elemesh (talk)11:26, 27 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I know for a fact that it consists of 60-70% percent voters who supported Hussein Obama, but I did that before and a Wikipedian argued that has nothing to do with being liberal.76.102.193.102 (talk)11:28, 27 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Well you need to link to that fact or a similar one. Then everything is ok: if you vote for a Liberal president, logic suggests you are liberal.Elemesh (talk)11:30, 27 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, I'll try to find that online from a reputable source and link it. What if I don't find that. I know exactly where and when I read it. It was the second issue of the "Piedmont Post" after the election. I am sure it was published 11/19/2008. As far as I know, only county results are posted online. The county may be even more liberal than Piedmont. Thanks.76.102.193.102 (talk)11:33, 27 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Newspaper is fine - it is a reliable source. I am not sure how you reference them, but it is doubtless possible. Try asking at the help desk.Elemesh (talk)11:35, 27 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
WHSL, I am going to leave you with this. I agree the current situation is not ideal, but if correct they are useful encyclopediac content and should be kept, if referenced.Elemesh (talk)11:41, 27 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I've removed the "well known for its disapproval ofConservatism" line as unsourced OR. I've also removed the voting map ref as OR. Showing that a county voted heavily in favor of Barack Obama in 2008 doesn't show them as liberal, it just shows that they voted heavily in favor of the candidate. I haven't removed the liberal line in the intro yet because I haven't tried to check the article yet. Right now I'm guessing it's more OR based on voting for Barack Obama, but completing the source by filling out{{cite news}} including at least the specific article being mentioned would help me in assuming good faith here. Right now I'm thinking this is the same POV pushing that [[User:]](logged in as well as from various IPs) has been doing, both here and atPiedmont Unified School District andPiedmont High School (California). -Optigan13 (talk)01:37, 15 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I was involved at the PHS edit war and wholeheartedly agree that a city that favored Barack Obama in the 2008 election does not constitute an "extremely liberal" city that is known for its "disapproval of conservatism." The only encyclopedic, non-POV statement I can see that source backing up would be something along the lines of "X percent of Piedmont residents voted for Barack Obama in the 2008 presidential election." One might even be able to stretch the information to support a statement like "Piedmont residents supported Democratic Party candidates in the 2008 general election." and your IP addresses - DO NOT take my words out of context, as you did on the PHS discussion. I now see why your RFAfailed miserably.KuyaBriBriTalk16:12, 15 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I've had enough. I tried to resolve this without getting admins involved when I became involved at the PHS article but this is ridiculous. Please seeWP:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents#Recurring edit war on articles related to Piedmont, California.KuyaBriBriTalk17:30, 15 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I've removed the extremely liberal line(diff). It did not specify an article or page number to verify the source. I had initially hoped would specify what article, but seeing as he's been indef blocked again I've removed it. If anyone wants to specify the article or page being used, or something where I could try and find the article to check that is isn't further improper synthesis feel free to let me know. -Optigan13 (talk)19:54, 15 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
i added names from the Category for people from piedmont. some of the following names already in the article have no references here or in their articles that say they are from piedmont: al davis, tre cool, billie joe armstrong, peter docter, country joe, dean butler austin tichenor f wayne valley james gamble. also, some other names not in the category are also not refd. i left the info standing wihtout refs, as my purpose was to remove the inappropriate link to the category. all unrefed names should be refd or removed.Mercurywoodrose (talk)04:17, 23 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Aside from the last episode where the bus pull up to the sign, is there any other earlier episodes ofGravity Falls which specifies this as their home?184.145.18.50 (talk)19:50, 18 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]
This article lacks a climate section, which any good city article will have. Minimum and maximum temperatures, average rainfall and snowfall, records, that sort of thing. I am not qualified to add it myself, but if anyone is, please do so. Thanks!1980fast (talk)21:59, 8 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The main pic on this page is Henry J. Kaiser Elementary School and Highlands Country Club in Oakland, several miles from Piedmont135.180.194.138 (talk)20:30, 6 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I've updated the picture to be a house of local historic note, but it's still not a great photo, and I don't have a better one myself it seems. If anyone wants to take a better photo, something of the city hall / fire house area would probably be a nice photo.Tschuy (talk)01:43, 14 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Why is the pop. Estimate for 2023 For that year not this one, and also why is it so low. It would literally require an average of one person leaving like every 3 days.71.234.94.101 (talk)06:57, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I keep trying to add the news that went viral about the 3 teens that died in the Cybertruck but 2 editors keep taking it down, saying its too newsy and claimingWP:ROUTINE. How is an early morning drunk-driving accident involving area college-age teens returning to town in a flashy vehicle byElon Musk's company a routine piece of news? Please look at theedit history with reasons for edits before commenting. thanksShelter3 (talk)20:51, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]