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Reviewer:WizardmanOperation Big Bear03:16, 11 June 2010 (UTC)Overall this is a good article, though I have a couple issues:[reply]

  • "On May 8 on Impact!," I'd reword to 'on the may 8 episode' or the like.
  • "They accomplished the task on the April 16 episode of Impact! Kong would turn face by attempting to retaliate." With the way it's written, it seems like a run-on, since i'm not sure if the exclamation point is meant to be the end of the sentence.
  • In the personal life section, all the sentences seem to start with she or her. Add in a couple Stevens or tweak how they start to break the repetition.

Just a couple small things; I'll put the article on hold and pass when the issues are fixed.WizardmanOperation Big Bear03:16, 11 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. I've addressed all of your concerns.Nikki31102:39, 12 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Looks good, article now passes.WizardmanOperation Big Bear22:29, 12 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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