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Reviewer:MisterBee1966 (talk·contribs)16:19, 12 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]


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1.Well-written:
1a. the prose is clear, concise, andunderstandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.
  • "the full "Barbara" anti-aircraft refit", probably my lack of understanding English. What is a "Barbara" refit?
1b. it complies with theManual of Style guidelines forlead sections,layout,words to watch,fiction, andlist incorporation.
2.Verifiable withno original research:
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance withthe layout style guideline.
2b.reliable sources arecited inline. All content thatcould reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
2c. it containsno original research.
3.Broad in its coverage:
3a. it addresses themain aspects of the topic.
  • "The ship participated in the late 1937 naval maneuvers". Accroding to HRS v6 p. 216. As part of the 2. Zerstörerdivision under command of Friedrich Bonte.
  • "Three men were convicted by a drumhead court-martial and sentenced to death" According toDer Spiegel, responsible (signed) for the death sentence was Bernhard Rogge."So etwas unterschreibt man nicht einfach".Der Spiegel (in German). Vol. 43. 1965. Retrieved3 November 2015.
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (seesummary style).
4.Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
5.Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoingedit war or content dispute.
6.Illustrated, if possible, bymedia such asimages,video, oraudio:
6a. media aretagged with theircopyright statuses, andvalid non-free use rationales are provided fornon-free content.
6b. media arerelevant to the topic, and havesuitable captions.
7.Overall assessment.

Barbara was the codename for the AA modernization program. Thanks for giving me more information to help fill out the article (with sources!).--Sturmvogel 66 (talk)19:12, 3 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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