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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below.Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such asthis nomination's talk page,the article's talk page orWikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page.No further edits should be made to this page.
New reviewer needed; it's been over a month and a half since the initial post and a full seven days since the subsequent ping. Striking the original "placeholder". Thank you to whoever takes this on.BlueMoonset (talk)18:58, 2 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
New enough, long enough. Hook short enough and sourced (as is every paragraph). No neutrality problems found, no copyright problems found, no maintenance templates found. Appears to be your second DYK; you get three further credits. Good to go.--Launchballer11:21, 3 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Overall a well-written article, but I do have a few suggestions re the prose:
"Clown" is an answer song that addresses comments rapper Eminem made about her in the media and on The Eminem Show (2002) track "Superman" → "Clown" is an answer song to the comments that rapper Eminem made about Carey in the media and on the 2022 track "Superman"
Done
and "The Night I Fell in Love" by the Pet Shop Boys → the Pet Shop Boys' "The Night I Feel in Love" to make it consistent
Done
Also consider adding release years to the said songs
Added
"Carey performed "Clown" in a circus-themed segment during the 2003–2004 Charmbracelet World Tour while two puppeteers controlled an Eminem look-alike on stage." → On the Charmbracelet World Tour, Carey performed... while...
Done
"while promoting the project" → promoting the album
Done
"It features background vocals by Carey and Trey Lorenz" → The song features
Done
I wouldn't cite the lyrics from the booklet (WP:NOTLYRICS) unless they were quoted and discussed by the scholarly sources/reviews
I cut down on the lyrics
"a worthy exception to the album's formula" any more context as to what "formula" means here?
Added a note and changed "formula" to "theme"
Not sure if "juxtaposed with" is the right wording... I'd just use "compared to"
New reviewer needed; it's been over a month and a half since the initial post and a full seven days since the subsequent ping. Striking the original "placeholder". Thank you to whoever takes this on.BlueMoonset (talk)18:58, 2 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
New enough, long enough. Hook short enough and sourced (as is every paragraph). No neutrality problems found, no copyright problems found, no maintenance templates found. Appears to be your second DYK; you get three further credits. Good to go.--Launchballer11:21, 3 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
are unassessed)
