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Good articles2016 Paris–Roubaix has been listed as one of theSports and recreation good articles under thegood article criteria. If you can improve it further,please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you canreassess it.
Review: May 22, 2016. (Reviewed version).
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HiRacklever. Regardingthis edit, I was asked in a couple of GA reviews to move away from the "The 2016 X was the 115th X", because it's a bit tautologous and doesn't immediately describe the event to a lay reader. In the articles I've written recently, I've changed the order so that information goes later in the opening paragraph, asin this edit. Hope that looks OK to you.Relentlessly (talk)16:09, 10 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

OK --Racklever (talk)20:02, 10 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer:Zwerg Nase (talk·contribs)07:47, 2 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]


I will review this.Zwerg Nase (talk)07:47, 2 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It isreasonably well written.
    a(prose): b(MoS forlead,layout,word choice,fiction, andlists):
  2. It isfactually accurate andverifiable.
    a(reference section): b(citations toreliable sources): c(OR):
  3. It isbroad in its coverage.
    a(major aspects): b(focused):
  4. It follows theneutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It isstable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated byimages and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a(images are tagged and non-free content havefair use rationales): b(appropriate use withsuitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

I made some minor changes myself. What is left:

  • You should putpeloton in italics everywhere it appears.
  • Race summary: "after coming back from being his crash" - something is not right here.
  • Race summary: "he agreed to work fully for Stannard" - pure speculation, you should rephrase this.
  • Post-race: Same problem here as with E3, try to find more ways to write "he said".

That's about it. Again, good work! On hold for now.Zwerg Nase (talk)11:01, 12 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Stepped in and fixed all except point three. The ref does note that pretty clearly, actually, so I don't know how that'd be rephrased without making it incorrect.Wizardman14:06, 22 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you,Wizardman! Promoted.Zwerg Nase (talk)14:13, 22 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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