18:1418:14, 28 May 2010diffhist−160God of War III→Plot: Unnecessary detail. Hades motivations for wanting revenge aren't important in the overall story. Grammar mistakes fixed that keep getting restored.
17:1117:11, 26 May 2010diffhist+246God of War IIIThere is nothing that says the plot NEEDS to be in-universe. Extreme over use of semicolons. Disjointed sentence flow and lack of narrative direction. See talk page concerning issues withWP:OWN.