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Latest comment:1 month ago by CS012831 in topicChange first sentence in the lead section
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Change first sentence in the lead section

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Latest comment:1 month ago1 comment1 person in discussion

The description is very confusing for the average leader. Usually, when describing a country, we use simply language like:

The United States of America is a country located in North America.

However, in this article, the first sentence described a lot of things about the country, even though it could be simply put as:

Vatican City, officially theVatican City State (Italian: Stato della Città del Vaticano;Latin: Status Civitatis Vaticanae), is a country enclave surrounded byItaly.

I agree that the description of "landlockedsovereign country,city-state,microstate, andenclave surrounded by, and historically a part of,Rome, Italy." is correct, but it could be put in the second sentence.

I propose that we change the first two sentences to:

Vatican City, officially theVatican City State (Italian:Stato della Città del Vaticano;Latin:Status Civitatis Vaticanae), is a country enclave surrounded byItaly. It is alandlockedsovereign country,city-state, andmicrostate that was historically a part of Rome, Italy.

CS012831 (talk)15:39, 16 February 2025 (UTC)Reply

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