Miss Inconspicuous Maid Cleaning Co.!
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this is my reasona game with very cute and adorable art and a simple way of playing, but it has a dark side, I really feel sorry for ellie, ellie is just a girl who wants to find a job, this is a very interesting game! I like this type of cute game with gore scenes, please make more games like this, I'm counting on you ෆ╹ .̮ ╹ෆ
Man, what a great game... I've never played such a good visual novel since playing DDLC. I like that we have minigames here instead of only clicking to see more text. The ending made me think about those things for a moment. Honestly I think that Miss did the right thing, she saved probably tens or hundreds of people. Poor Ellie, I really like her as a character. She has that happiness, kindness and energy. I have 1 question: how many endings are there? Because at the end we have 3 options and at the start we have 2 options.
I played your game on a yt video (bottom of the comment). I don't get many views but maybe someone will decide to play the game on their own. Maybe it'll help with making the game more popular hah.
I also saw that you have more games created. I'll surely play few of them. Sorry for such a long comment but I just like to write extensively XD
Have a good day!
Oh, I almost forgot. I gave this game a 5 star rating. Great job!
THANK YOU SO MUCH :'))) this means so much... i love when people are resonated by the game :'D thank you for playing!!! and yes dermimi's is a little similar :) more horror less morality struggle hehe
there are 2 real endings & 1 joke ending!! there were supposed to be 3 real endings but i ran out of time ;(
Hello, cinnamew!
My name is Zogar, and I am very interested in your game "Miss Inconspicuous Maid Cleaning Co.". It impressed me a lot with its story and atmosphere, and I'm sure it could become even more popular if it was available in other languages.
I would like to offer you a translation of your game into Russian. This will help you to expand your audience and attract players from Russian-speaking countries. I am ready to translate it myself and provide you with translated files for integration into the game.
If you are interested in my proposal, please let me know and I will be glad to discuss all the details.
Thank you for your creativity and attention!
WAHOO THANK YOU!! it's all hard work from the team :) if you'd like to see the last ending, you can skip to the end of the last minigame by clicking the lower left corner in the about screen
you should check out dermimi's if you haven't yet, it's similar to this one :0 and the cursor was made by nii!
那太好了！你觉得一部分繁体一部分简体可以吗。。。？这游戏有点长，我觉得全部都一个人翻译有点太多了哈哈
刚刚看见你的邮件 我等下回答！I'd open-source and share the repository, but unfortunately it's under the other coder's GitHub account and I only have Write permissions :( Although our other/similar game,Dermimi's!, is alreadyopen source.
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I had a question, but I think I found the answer in this paragraph: Why Miss murdered Ellie? If Miss said that she were cleaning the world from very corrupted people and is obsessed with Ellie's innocence, and also support Ellie all time. Ellie trusted Miss even after she saw the truth. And even after that she didn't behave with a person who had just killed someone else and could kill her. (yes, it shows she is stupid too). She tried to convince Miss that her murders weren't right. And even thought that she was going to open the door when she was going for kill her. By morals view of Miss, Ellie is less corrupted then herself. And Ellie could do nothing against Miss, she knew nothing about her, she is only a weak kind. They have a kind of sapphics relationship (that is the reason why the game have a tag "LGBT", I think). It seems that Miss is like a big sister to Ellie. And she didn't feel something similar to the previous employee, compare "an eye for an eye … my heart for a neck" "she took my eye and you took my heart. Yes, I noticed "For people who don't even give me a second glance unless I'm giving them all I have?". Seems she is really searching a partner that is more than co-worker. But phrases "What will happen next time? Can I keep going like this?" and "I can only keep going on. Perhaps it's time to find someone new, just one last time." show that she went completely mad and can easy kill not only corrupted people, but also employees or even more. She continue hire new employee.
What will happen in other timelines? If select the last options. Will Miss kill Ellie after or during the cleaning? They have a similar phrase "I wouldn't ever push you to do anything you don't want to do". In rejection timeline she murdered her after that, but in undecided timeline she said "Not even in a different timeline, had you said something else." And she can notice that she will no more work together.. Maybe she know too much to control Ellie.
I find in the comment that Ellie is also horrendously hypocritical, but don't understand where? If it's only about "No one should go through this. Except you.", I think a lot of people can think similar when dying. I don't write much about Ellie: She is stupid, naive, fearful and lies to herself. And also too much love money.
Interesting, that even store clerk said "Ah, were you part of the drug…".
Thank you. The game is really good. I prefer the best ending when Ellie pass the job. I only registered to write the comment. :)
OH MY GOD THANK YOU!!!! as the writer i was waiting for the day someone would try to dissect my 4 am yap lines HAHA. yes ellie is stupid. she is so so naive and i tried to make both characters super hypocritical (the game is supposed to make you think about your own hypocrisy regarding world issues)!! yes they are basically sapphic hehehe and like the lines you noticed (THANK YOU FOR NOTICING THEM i've been dropping hints and revealing it in the comments) she is used to not being so close to coworkers (to answer your question on why miss kills ellie, it's bc she thinks of ellie as a "failed experiment" and is used to just disposing of them like that), but she felt some sort of attraction/pull towards ellie so she's really depressed about it.
miss's hypocrisy is knowing she's not really doing anything for the world but doing all this anyways (she even hurts innocent ppl like ellie) + the timeline thing you noticed :). ellie's hypocrisy is still the "No one should go through this. Except you." line bc she is super adamant that no one deserves to die even with that dead guy committing so much harm (arguably way worse than what miss's killing), yet she doesn't apply it to herself when she's at the other end of the knife. of course it's normal for people to think like that -- it's so normal for people to speak like they're heroes then turn around and act in a way that shows they're not. this was an allude to "pro-life" supporters who get abortions (or don't support policies that would support peoples' lives after birth) or anti-lgbt politicians who lead an lgbt life under the table (have you seen the sharp rise in grindr usage during republican conventions? it's rly funny).
and LMAOOO is the best ending really just the speedrun ending?? 😭 it could be argued that it's not though bc ellie would've kept living in naivety
also i wrote an essay abt mimco (cited it as an indie game... my prof doesn't know i wrote it 🤭) and this comment reminded me of that HAHA
waaaaaa I love Ellie and Miss sm!!<333 I have a question though, when do you think the sequel will be out on itch.io? I have been a bit busy recently with school and exams so i want to find the perfect time to binge the game and find all the endings!! No rush though I am aware that making a game like this requires some time especially with all the expectations for the players but if you have at least a thought about when you will finish the sequel that would be great!!1! :D
thank u sm for the support!! tbh sequel work has been suuuper slow, this game only took 72 hours but the sequel has been worked on for like over a year atp now with minimal progress </3 i've been swamped w schoolwork and stuff but hopefully can get the story close to done soon, i unfortunately don't have a date for you though except that it'll be a while :(
this is the first time I've heard about this game, I was looking for the artist of the game cover I didn't even know it was an actual game?!!! and OMG I wish visual novels were this cute! the art the music the minigames! a complete perfection!! 10/10 I really hope you guys continue doing games the same vibes as this one!
edit: it would've been nice if there was a skip button and dialog history but still 10/10! :3