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Former good articleEconomy of Ohio was one of theSocial sciences and society good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet thegood article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can berenominated. Editors may also seek areassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
Did You Know Article milestones
DateProcessResult
February 27, 2008Featured article candidateNot promoted
March 16, 2008Good article nomineeListed
November 1, 2008Featured article candidateNot promoted
April 2, 2023Good article reassessmentDelisted
Did You Know A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia'sMain Page in the"Did you know?" column onFebruary 20, 2008.
The text of the entry was:Did you know ...that theeconomy of Ohio includes the world's largestplants for processingyogurt,soup,ketchup andfrozen pizza?
Current status:Delisted good article
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Fact Check

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I tried verifying the first paragraph and couldn't validate the claim of being ranked #8 in 2008. In 2009, Ohio was ranked 39th overall. Also, the link to reference [7] leads to a log-in page that can be bypassed only with the month and date of the issue. (I couldn't find an article at the website that could substantiate the claim of #5 Ranking.) Ohio has 5 of the top 115 colleges ... and was ranked #8 by the same magazine in 2008 for best high schools.[6] Overall, the state's schools were ranked #5 in the country in 2010.[7] - DjKinDayton.—Precedingunsigned comment added by137.100.121.30 (talk) 16:54, 21 June 2010 (UTC) Reference [7] was validated on 20100621 by DjKinDayton—Precedingunsigned comment added by137.100.121.30 (talk)17:18, 21 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review

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I've renominated the article atGAN - I glanced, and it needs a more thorough review than just "one source throughout" IMO. Hopefully someone will give it such, and I'll be happy to provide a 2nd opinion if they need it.dihydrogen monoxide(H20)09:35, 7 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

GA nomination passes

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GA review (seehere for what the criteria are, andhere for what they are not)
  1. It isreasonably well written.
    a(prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b(MoS forlead,layout,word choice,fiction, andlists):
  2. It isfactually accurate andverifiable.
    a(reference section): b(citations toreliable sources): c(OR):
  3. It isbroad in its coverage.
    a(major aspects): b(focused):
  4. It follows theneutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It isstable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated byimages and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a(images are tagged and non-free content havefair use rationales): b(appropriate use withsuitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
GA review (seehere for criteria)

This is a nice piece of work, but it still has some shortcomings with respect to the good article criteria.

  1. It isreasonably well written.
    a(prose): b(MoS):
  2. It isfactually accurate andverifiable.
    a(references): b(citations toreliable sources): c(OR):
    I know there were concerns in the FAC about the article having only one source for sources (the Ohio Department of Development), but I don't see it as a problem given that it's from a state government and appears to be reliable. Furthermore, there are sources (though not many of them proportionally to the ODoD ones) from other outlets as well, so it's hardly entirely a one-source article. Finally, this is GA, not FA. We're a little more flexible here.
  3. It isbroad in its coverage.
    a(major aspects): b(focused):
  4. It follows theneutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It isstable.
    No edit wars etc.:
  6. It is illustrated byimages, where possible and appropriate.
    a(images are tagged and non-free images havefair use rationales): b(appropriate use withsuitable captions):
    Kudos on the clever use of the state quarter for the lede image.
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    Good luck at FA now! I'll certainly vote for it. --Hemlock Martinis (talk)18:47, 16 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Article Status

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Articles should not be given A-class ratings without undergoing review. WikiProject Ohio has an article review departmenthere and WikiProject Economics has no formal review process but can be reachedhere.§hep¡Talk to me!01:53, 8 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The Air Force

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It's a little odd to call the Wright-Patterson Air Force Base an industry with headquarters in Dayton, OH. The Air Force, of course, has its headquarters atthe Pentagon, in Washington DC (or Arlington, Virginia, depending on how you think of it)..Geoffrey.landis (talk)15:17, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Agreed. Changed the wording for that section. It shouldn't have had the word "headquarters" in the section anyway. It was meant to list major employers for Ohio, not necessarily only headquarters. WPAFB is included in the list from the cited source, so it should be included. Thanks for pointing that out. It needed rewording.Texas141 (talk)19:54, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

German magazine Citation for Nanotek's Graphene-based ultracapacitor application

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Footnote 150 cites a Dec 2010 article by Prachi Patel in the online mag Heise Online to support the statement that Nanotek contributed an important breakthrough in ultracap energy density. This German-language article appears in Heise-Online's 'Technology Review' section; as such it is a same-day translation of Patel's original article in Technology Review, the MIT journal of tech news. For the English WP article on Ohio Economy, the original Technology Review article seems more appropriate. Changing the citation from Heise-Online (http://www.heise.de/tr/artikel/Elektroden-aus-zerknuelltem-Kohlenstoff-1149424.html) to Technology Review onlineBookerj (talk)19:07, 24 May 2012 (UTC).[reply]

First woman to walk in space?

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The info box saysDr. Kathryn Dwyer Sullivan, a resident of Columbus, was the first woman to walk in space. This directly contradicts information in the pageList of female astronauts which states thatSvetlana Savitskaya was the first woman to walk in space. Which is correct?--Wikishagnik (talk)18:26, 28 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Peer review

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Should we subject this article to peer review?Lbertolotti (talk)15:12, 12 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

GA Reassessment

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Economy of Ohio

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The following discussion is closed.Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


Article(edit |visual edit |history) ·Article talk(edit |history) ·WatchWatch article reassessment page • GAN review not found
Result: Delisted on issues with criteria 2 & 3.~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk)12:15, 2 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

A GA from 2008. There looks to be some uncited statements and sections. Along with that there may possibly be some areas that need updating.Onegreatjoke (talk)20:01, 23 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed.Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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