This version adds new lines, changes some details, and tightens up the overall story.

Specifically...
-The introduction is lighter on the materialism, which is more subtle now.
-Evil has a new reason for approaching Hart. Workplace rumours, eh?
-This also changes Hart and Evil's printer room confrontation.
-Hart is now a Classics major who got rejected from business school. He self-studies finance.
-Evil says another suggestive line to Zimmerman.
-Fran is slightly more ambiguous.
-Hart's dirty talk in the final scene is 70% better.