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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below.Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such asthis nomination's talk page,the article's talk page orWikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page.No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was:promoted byLord Roem (talk) 18:30, 16 February 2012 (UTC)

Krejci Dump

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The Krejci dump and salvage yard

Created/expanded byRunmikeyrun (talk). Nominated byShearonink (talk) at 01:57, 9 February 2012 (UTC)

  • Article was created on February 5th, so it should be included there, not the 8th. I will move it and begin a review.Mgrē@sŏn 14:03, 14 February 2012 (UTC)
  • According toCuyahoga Valley National Park, "The area was redesignated a national park by Congress on October 11, 2000". Since the dump property was acquired in the mid-1980s, the hook and History section should refer to 'National Recreation Area', rather than 'National Park'. Additionally, the Outcome section states, "As of 2012", but the reference cited was dated July 1, 2011, which does not support 2012. Not a big deal, but factually incorrect.Mgrē@sŏn 13:33, 15 February 2012 (UTC)
Adjusted "As of 2012" to "According to the NPS, the Krejci dump site should be in the final stages of revegetation in the spring of 2012." Adjusted the lede, deleted an unsupported/POV statement in HIstory section. The History section refers to the name change in the first sentence as "at which time the National Park Service acquired the property as part of theCuyahoga Valley National Park (formerly theCuyahoga Valley National Recreation Area)". (I suppose the phrasing could be changed in that one sentence?) The ALT 1 hook is just under/at the limit of 200 characters....
Shearonink (talk) 14:45, 15 February 2012 (UTC)
  • Article passes length, refs, no copyvio, dates. IMHO, ALT1 is too long; let's go with the original hook using Recreation Area.
Mgrē@sŏn 17:05, 15 February 2012 (UTC)
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