Source: Cited at ref 3 in the article: Hippen, Wilfried;Die Tageszeitung, 8 February 2022, p. 24, ISSN 0931-9085. (in German)
ALT1: ... thatHomeopathy Unrefuted?(poster pictured) never sets out to disprovehomeopathy—yet its practitioners often end up doing it themselves?Source: per source 1 in article: Thiam, Boussa (February 14, 2022). "Die Widersprüche der Koryphäen". Deutschlandfunk Kultur (in German).
ALT2: ... that inHomeopathy Unrefuted?(poster pictured), whenhomeopaths finish explaining their therapy, few consistent principles remain?Source: per source 1 in article: Thiam, Boussa (February 14, 2022). "Die Widersprüche der Koryphäen". Deutschlandfunk Kultur (in German).
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Created byKAMfakten (talk).Number of QPQs required:0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
Comment: I bolded the article you are nominating, please make sure to bold them next time. ThanksWarm Regards,Miminity (Talk?) (me contribs) 11:35, 6 September 2025 (UTC)
Oppose: I don't think this is interesting or neutral in any way. Should be rejected.— Precedingunsigned comment added byKingsacrificer (talk •contribs) 19:41, 9 October 2025 (UTC)
Need a full review, my two cents one that explains why it's not "interesting or neutral in any way".ミラP@Miraclepine 01:11, 10 October 2025 (UTC)
Overall: The article has sentences that are non-neutral. For example,The topic was perfectly suited to the medium of non-confrontational Socratic dialogues expresses in wikivoice what thesource presents as the views of the filmmaker. Unsourced sentences likeEven though Homeopathy Unrefuted? is certainly conceived as a niche product, it's unclear whether it's of more interest to homeopathy's proponents or opponents appear to be original research. Meanwhile, none of the hooks work. ALT0 is not explicitly stated in the article, and the only discussion of the Socratic method is cited to other sources, not the source provided in the nom. Meanwhile, ALT1 and ALT2 are sourced to a Q&A interview with the filmmaker, which is not independent, and thus the hook should be attributed to the filmmaker. However, attributing a rather banal observation about how the film is constructed to the filmmaker makes mostly uninteresting hooks even less interesting. At any rate, the article and the hooks need some work. I'd suggest some new alternatives where the hook matches claims in the article and is sourced to a suitable reliable source.Dclemens1971 (talk) 13:28, 15 October 2025 (UTC)
Thank you, this was helpful! I clarified the source of the first statement and deleted the second one without source. I also checked the article about other non-neutral sentences. If you find more, I will correct them. I refrased the first hook in a way, that it reproduces exactly the wording of the journalist inDie Tageszeitung and offer a second hook that is less literal, but would be more poignated:
ALT4: ... thatHomeopathy Unrefuted?(poster pictured) only features people who believe in and practice homeopathy, yet the film ends up being more damaging for them than if critics had been included?
Source: Cited at ref 3 in the article: Hippen, Wilfried;Die Tageszeitung, 8 February 2022, p. 24, ISSN 0931-9085. (in German)
ALT5: ... thatHomeopathy Unrefuted?(poster pictured) interviews only homeopathy believers, yet this alone makes the film more damaging for them than including skeptics?
Source: Cited at ref 3 in the article: Hippen, Wilfried;Die Tageszeitung, 8 February 2022, p. 24, ISSN 0931-9085. (in German)
Neither of these new alternative hooks is neutrally worded. They present the opinion of a single interviewer in wikivoice as a fact. For all I know, not having seen the movie, the film is more damaging to homeopathy than if critics had been included, but that is the opinion of Wilfried Hippen, not something we can state on the Wikipedia homepage as a fact. Normally we'd want to attribute the opinion to the person expressing it, but Hippen appears to benon-notable and has no Wikipedia page, so I'm not sure that saying...did you know that Wilfried Hippen thought this about a movie works at all as a hook. Also, neither of these hooks appears in the article. P.S. Upon second thought, the text in the poster image is not legible, so I've updated the review to account for that. If this is eventually promoted, the image should not be used.Dclemens1971 (talk) 20:51, 17 October 2025 (UTC)
Thank you, I see what you mean. So what about hooks based on the films content itself, like:
Comment: A statement like "ends up questioning the method’s credibility" is no interpretation of mine or of a journalist or the filmmaker, but this is, what actually goes on in the film itself.--KAMfakten (talk) 20:10, 18 October 2025 (UTC)
First, to establish mybona fides on this topic: did you hear the one about the homeopath who forgot to take his medication and died of an overdose? Second: too many of these are formulated as Your Opinion.ALT6 will work.DS (talk) 13:48, 21 October 2025 (UTC)
@KAMfakten: I agree withDragonflySixtyseven that ALTS7-9 do express personal opinions (or present personal opinions in wikivoice). ALT6 is in the article, but it does not comply withWP:DYKHFC's requirement thatThe facts of the hook in the article should be cited no later than the end of the sentence in which they appear. Plot summaries are not required to sourced in articles that appear in DYK, but thehook fact is, without any exception for hook facts that appear in plot summaries. The hook would also need to be rephrased as something like thisALT6a: ... thatHomeopathy Unrefuted? featureshomeopaths naming remedies derived from cancer tissue, magnets and even theBerlin Wall? But before anything else can be done, theWP:DYKHFC issue must be addressed.Dclemens1971 (talk) 15:49, 21 October 2025 (UTC)
In order not to rely solely on the film itself with a time stamp as a source, I have modified the hook to reflect facts that are mentioned in secondary sources:
ALT6b: ... that the documentaryHomeopathy Unrefuted? showshomeopaths suggesting that even a fridge, a camera, or theBerlin Wall could be made into a homeopathic remedy?
Sources: Cited in ref 1: Hoffmann, Werner; Forum für Kritisches Denken, and ref 2: Oßwald, Dieter; Kontext: Wochenzeitung (both in German).
Question: I added these footnotes to the content section of the article to meet DYK requirements. May I remove them again after the DYK review, or should they remain?KAMfakten (talk) 21:18, 25 October 2025 (UTC)
@KAMfakten: The Berlin Wall reference appears to be confirmed only in remarks by the director (that source is a Q&A interview), and I'm reluctant to approve a hook about a movie that's based on claims made by the filmmaker. The refrigerator and camera bits do come from secondary coverage. Is there a third substance you can source from a secondary source for what homeopaths in the movie claim therapies can be made of? On a separate note, the section headings in the summary of the documentary's content are excessive and affect the article's presentability; seeWP:OVERSECTION. I do not believe it's necessary for readers to read single-sentence summaries of each individual "chapter". As for your question, please leave citations in the content section. They should be in the article for readers' benefit if and when this appears on the main page.Dclemens1971 (talk) 12:18, 26 October 2025 (UTC)
@Dclemens1971: The Berlin Wall is mentioned by the journalist, and then the director explains why he included it in the film. This should be sufficient as a secondary source. And yes, you're right — I’ve used the flexibility of the Wikipedia Manual of Style in the summary in favor of clarity and orientation, and that was intentional. The subheadings make the text scannable: readers can quickly grasp the structure and choose what to explore in detail. Even short paragraphs deserve their own heading when they cover a distinct topic — this prevents separate ideas from blending into a vague summary. Moreover, the headings exactly match those in the film, and the text’s structure visually mirrors the film’s structure itself. I wouldn’t normally use paragraphs that way in a plot summary, but in this case, it seemed like the right decision.KAMfakten (talk) 14:02, 26 October 2025 (UTC)
@KAMfakten: The interviewer's only mention of the Berlin Wall isDie "Berliner Mauer" wirkt automatisch lächerlich (roughlyThe 'Berlin Wall' automatically seems laughable). That doesn't say that the homeopath brought it up as an example of a homeopathic remedy. The source also doesn't support the text in the article, which names the interviewee who said this when the source doesn't. So this part of the hook still needs to be fixed. AndWP:OVERSECTION is quite clear:Very short sections and subsections clutter an article with headings and inhibit the flow of the prose. Short paragraphs and single sentences generally do not warrant their own subheadings. The "Content" section of this article is exactly that -- too many subsections that are just a sentence or two. There is no requirement that the content section include subheadings that match the chapters of the documentary, particularly if the summaries of them are so short, and it does seriously interfere with the presentability of the article.Dclemens1971 (talk) 01:26, 27 October 2025 (UTC)