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@Seasider53, regardingthis edit: You restored a version with an inconsistent writing style, which is no improvement. You should have either used the correct writing style throughout the whole article or pointed out on the talk page that the form with hyphens is the correct one. Simply restoring a version with some correct and some incorrect forms is no improvement at all, and arguably even worse because the previous version was just wrong, whereas the current version is both wrong and inconsistent.Maxeto0910 (talk)13:16, 8 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Are you referring to the “the first generation of iPads” and similar sentence structures? The lack of hyphens here would be correct. Not every mention of the generation will have hyphens.Seasider53 (talk)16:33, 8 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I know; I'm referring to the instance of "[...] Apple continued to sell the older model at the same price, while the price for the newer 10th generation model was increased", which lacks a hyphen despite being needed.Maxeto0910 (talk)17:15, 8 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The article currently contains the text "Various accessibility described in § Accessibility functions enable users...". Evidently this is supposed to be a link to something, but to what?Riordanmr (talk)21:59, 10 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]