@Tarlby Hi! Thank you so much for your detailed comments. I've just implemented the first round of changes and corrections based on your feedback. Hope it's not disruptive to do that before you're fully done reviewing. Please let me know if there's anything else that crops up.MidnightMayhem (talk)04:33, 15 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
It's completely normal and expected for nominators to address objections before the reviewer is done looking at the article. Don't worry!Tarlby(t) (c)04:39, 15 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]
There's not much here summarizing the development of the game.
Done Expanded the lead with a second paragraph summarizing the design philosophy and moved the sentence about the visual style there. Also shifted some other text around.
...in search of its owner, and soon begins to uncover the dark secrets the park hides. ->...in search of its owner, and uncovers the dark secrets the park hides. For conciseness.
Players can shoot while running, or lock into position to focus their aim. I was confused for a second what "lock into position" means until I figured it means standing still. I think it should just say the player canstand still to focus their aim (assuming this is true).
Done This was a mistake from previous editors that I overlooked. You cannot move at all while shooting. I've fixed this and provided a source.
The article flip flops between "players" and "the player" and should choose only one perMOS:VGGP.
Done Unified as "players"
...Fine, Okay, Caution, Wounded and Critical. This sentence does not use anOxford comma despite the lead using it. The use of Oxford commas must be consistent.
Done
...can be replenished using bandages, medkits and antidotes. No Oxford comma.
...called the game "a true-to-form classic survival horror adventure", praised the setting and visual direction. They'repraising the setting and visual direction.
...described the game's narrative as complete and richer ->...described the story as more complete and richer Grammar and more concise.
Done
Hurley noted the "rewarding" and "refreshingly unfamiliar" story and commended its "feeling of surprise and uncertainty". Bueno commended... These sentences both use "commended" which feels a li'l repetitive.
Done Adjusted the wording
Handley praised the game's narrative twists and satisfying conclusion, although finding it lacked... ->Handley praised the game's narrative twists and satisfying conclusion, but found it lacked...
Done Adjusted the wording
...and balanced in difficulty, although found themselves stuck with some puzzles. ->...and balanced in difficulty, but found themselves struggling with some. Grammar and conciseness.
Done Adjusted the wording
...but opined that the game's combat and survival horror... ->...but opined that the combat and survival horror... For conciseness.
Done
Fenlon described the game as "too easy", feeling that the game's combat was simple and the puzzles were unmemorable. ->Fenlon described the game as "too easy", calling the combat simple and the puzzles unmemorable. For conciseness.
Done
...the enemies, resource management and combat... Missing Oxford comma.
Done
Crow Country surpassed 100,000 copies sold by October 2024, with the majority of sales on Steam... ->Crow Country sold 100,000 copies by October 2024, with the majority of sales on the distribution service Steam... You should also linkSteam.
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Done Expanded the lead with a second paragraph summarizing the design philosophy and moved the sentence about the visual style there. Also shifted some other text around.