Talk:Clive Barker's Undying
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Okay, I've added some stuff to this page which hopefully are improvements. Notable among them are a references section with a couple references, a "Gameplay" section with "Multiplayer" subsection (which mentions the game's lack thereof), a critical response section, and I have moved some prose around to hopefully organize the article some more. A lot of this is still in "stub" form so if you can add anything (especially if is referenced) please do so.
The two biggest problems facing the page at this point IMO are still the excessively long "weapons" and "spells" lists and the general lack of appropriate citation - as pointed out in the tags at the top. --Grandpafootsoldier05:20, 24 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Should the full story be included here?
201.13.103.12819:16, 15 April 2007 (UTC)(User:Tucalipe - Just forgot to log-in)[reply]
I'm sure you could add a plot synopsis, yes. Just make sure to keep it somewhat brief.Chronus Valtiel (talk)07:05, 13 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
According to my copy of the game and the ESRB's Website, it is rated mature, so therefore, I am changing it. [[1]]Edward432121:20, 16 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Updated Main Characters section. Added clarification of Otto's part in Patrick's history, and of Oneiros and it's only-partial contribution to the creatures in the game. Howlers, undead, and the savages of the Autumn Realm, for example, did not come from Oneiros. Also cleaned up some spelling errors.Billazilla (talk)02:56, 19 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Both Gamespot and IGN say that the minimum and recommended RAM is 64MB and 128MB respectively, yet this article claims that the minimum RAM is 256 MB. Is this an error, or do you know something they don't? I'm going to go ahead and change it for now, unless, of course, things have indeed changed.Chronus Valtiel (talk)06:59, 13 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
This article is poorly developed and improperly referenced, and needs to be expanded. There are several sources in the article's list of references that are improperly sourced and thus are just listed as numbers [1] - [7] instead of a proper footnote like the following:"Clive Barker's Undying". Revelations:the official Clive Barker resource. Retrieved November 23, 2006.. This should be fixed so that these citations are done correctly so that they appear properly in the article's list of references. The article also needs more information on the game's reception and release as these sections are way too short and need to be expanded with more reviews from critics and information on the game's sales. All of these changes need to occur in order for this article to meet Wikipiedia's standards of a well developed and properly referenced article.--Paleface Jack (talk)16:13, 19 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
