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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between10 January 2022 and11 March 2022. Further details are availableon the course page. Student editor(s):Ramirezd2 (article contribs). Peer reviewers:Beck Woollen,Neil Givens,Jennyfayfay.
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between25 August 2020 and5 December 2020. Further details are availableon the course page. Student editor(s):Mmcandrew. Peer reviewers:Liziming99,Viip42.
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Hello fellow wikipedians!I'm planning on making a series on edits on this article, primarily focusing on re-organizing the existing text to be clearer. The first edit I'll be making is to the article lead, which I feel is a little wordy and confusing. A lot of the information that I think needs to be cut from lead is really important, though, so I plan to add it back in later in more appropriate sections.Mmcandrew (talk)02:10, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
The next major edit I'm planning to do for this article is to re-arrange the sections and subsections. I think this should help clarify where certain information can be found, so right now a lot of the sections are unclear or redundant. I'm mostly doing this by re-arranging the content that the page already had, so I will probably need to go back through each section for flow and clarity.Mmcandrew (talk)23:30, 19 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Hello fellow editors!I'm planning on adding more high altitude sites to this article.Ramirezd2 (talk)18:31, 10 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Hello again!To finish off my edits I am going to add more detail and references to the "Selection of Children" section, and rewrite some of it for clarity.Ramirezd2 (talk)05:57, 4 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]